Like A Shooting Star. - Comments

*girlie screams*
THATS GORGEOUS!

I LOVE FLUFF!
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:crazy:

I could write this really long comment and tell you about everything I liked/didn't like but I'm not gonna.

Because I love fluff, and I'm gonna rape this story now for a bit.
'Twas great, please write more like it!

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Oh, this is adorable!
Ah, I loved it.
Oh, and I wonder why they broke up before?
Hmm...anyway I loved this!

Wow! That was gorgeous! They had such a sweet caring relationship. It makes me feel all tingly and warm inside. All the star imagery was beautiful! I’d never noticed that a scorpion was Frank’s star sign, well done to you for noticing. Plus the mention of it fit really well with the story. Sorry this comment is sucky, not much spare time at the moment. I also loved the past/present flashes, and how they pretty much were the same people in both time periods. Just wondering, why exactly did they break up before? If you had an answer, while you were writing this that is. Was it the age gap? Stunning as always Erika :arms:

Ah. :shock:

That was...beautiful.
Oh God, I loved it.

I don't even know what to say.
It was so...realistic!
Like how they were just a group of friends, one is sick (speaking of that, I loved how you made Mikey talk!), the other two have crushes on each other, how they were both so shy.

Aw.
Just...AW!


Although it frustrates me that I can't write that well.

Ah well.
Loved it.
LOVED IT SOOO MUCH!

my god! that was flufier than the bunnys at the farmer's market that i saw today!!!!!!

but in a good way.

sweeter than candy

cuter than puppies cute!

Aw Babe, I'm sorry I didn't take that virginity from you
You deserve much better than just some clapping hands, so I'll get to this comment board my own BJ comment. Hopefully people won't get offended that I gave you another BJ and I'm just advertising my qualities! :lmfao

Now, hmm, my beta comment:
Aww
You got what you needed for the fluffy story you wanted to create. You managed to do it beautifully, as always for sure. Anyway, hmm, what can I say?
I think the characters don’t matter for this story, since the very first kiss and the shooting star and their wishes. Very cute! I kinda knew that the wings had been some special place and ‘action’ for the couple, because that’s how fluffy things always work XD but I’m not complaining, and you sure chose a beautiful way of getting them close. The swings are not only fun but romantic, and a good place to sit side by side and have a very serious conversation. We always see those things in movies, and it’s very, very true.

Once more the flashbacks are the most important part of the story, and it fits very nicely. It just makes them sound very in love, even that they broke up once and needed to go back to where they had kissed the first time. I like it; it’s like they wanted to kiss for the first time again! How lovely is that?

I admit; my very favourite line was when they started to recall that first night of kisses and Gerard just said “We kissed”; that’s SO romantic! <3 It feel as if kissing were their natural state and couldn’t exactly be otherwise. And the story is very cute too; how old is that girl singing? Like, she sounds young XD The song is obviously about the first love and how cute and dreamy it can be for some people. And I am very much in love with this story, and I sure have said all I wanted to say. I’m sorry this is not a long ass comment, but the fluffy speaks for itself and I love it (:

PS: I LOVE how cute Mikey had to sound too with his ‘nose’ voice, haha! "But you said dat half ad hour ago! You're dot eved doig anydig!" made it for me XD

And I love how you accept my suggestions so many times! I feel like I'm writing this story with you and it feels just do wonderful to be related like this to someone as beautiful and adorable and amazing as you are <3
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This is brilliant :]]] <3