Fly Me Away - Comments

  • cin

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    I just finished reading it! I absolutely love it! I hope you write a sequel (even if it's been more than a year). (:
    September 9th, 2013 at 10:57pm
  • Mary-Alice White

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    I love this. Please tell me there is a sequel! I freaking will cry if not. You are an amazing writer. Although in the beginning you used some words that weren't right. For example once you used "aloud" when it should have been "allowed". Nothing major besides that it was amazing! Keep up the great work!
    December 26th, 2012 at 03:02am
  • discoveringclouds

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    found this last night and it was a nice story. Sometimes Maggie cries way too much though. Good luck in your writing!
    September 6th, 2012 at 06:55pm
  • nobodysnoone

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    omg i LOVED this pleaseee tell me theres a sequel please??
    July 13th, 2012 at 10:59am
  • amulette.

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    I hate you; making me fall in love with Jackson, pfft. Haha, this story was amazing and I don't really hate you c: But that was a damn cliffhanger on the last chapter, miss. Sequel, please? Thanks for writing this, oh my God! :)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 03:09am
  • captivateme

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    This story was so amazing! I couldn't stop reading it! Sequel please?!
    June 15th, 2012 at 08:59pm
  • Uno1213

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    I LOVED this story!!! Sequel!!! <3
    June 12th, 2012 at 02:55am
  • LuvIsForeveeCrazy

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    This is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read in my life. Despite the fact that you had a lot of grammatical errors, it still was interesting. Too means also, so that is the only time you can use it. You also added capital letters in the middle of your sentences. The word your means that it is possessive. Some that is yours belongs to you. You're means you are. Mother does not need to be capitalized unless it is at the beginning of a sentence of someone's actual name. And lastly, to show possession, you must add an apostrophe before the s. For example, " The bike was Tony's."
    June 7th, 2012 at 04:47pm
  • alq14fred

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    beautiful, but i still want more
    June 7th, 2012 at 04:57am
  • alq14fred

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    beautiful, but i still want more
    June 7th, 2012 at 04:57am
  • life.ruiners

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    awh!! its over. i havent been here since the beginning, but i've been here long enough to know how much work you've put into it. i'm so proud of you!! <3 i cant wait to read the sequel, super excited!! :))
    June 6th, 2012 at 05:32pm
  • who cried wolf?

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    this story is so adorable, please write a sequel :)
    June 6th, 2012 at 12:06pm
  • who cried wolf?

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    this story is so adorable, please write a sequel :)
    June 6th, 2012 at 12:05pm
  • hollow vessels

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    Soon? I need this to be done. :3
    March 31st, 2012 at 06:48am
  • ahitsnatalia

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    there is only one chapter left... where is it!?!?

    please, i need closure.

    so beautifully written, youve made me fall in love with Jackson
    June 16th, 2011 at 06:18pm
  • who cried wolf?

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    this is actually amazing.
    it's good enough to be published or even made into a movie, have u been on inkpop?
    u should put this story on there, people have had their stories published off it and i think the same will probably happen to yours, sorry, i'm blabbering because i'm excited because this is such an amazing story! gah!
    update soon please
    May 1st, 2011 at 02:55pm
  • It's Just Bones

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    This is really a wonderful story. I've been reading it all day and haven't been able to tear myself away :).
    I just finishes chapter 44, and after reading: 'perhaps he is something more' my mind definitely went to god hahahhahahahhahah
    January 24th, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • Laurrr.

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    I utterly adore this story, though it's pretty much done. :(
    I'm hoping for a happy ending. And a sequel. Definitely a sequel. :)
    Anyhoo, this story is fantastic, and you're fantastic, and your writing is fantastic, and I'm all done rambling now.
    December 27th, 2010 at 06:02pm
  • SuperVic123

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    Hello, first time reader and i am completely in love with your writing!!!! I cant wait for more!!!
    December 27th, 2010 at 02:04pm
  • ria

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    the wait was worth it! =)
    great story... kinda sad it's ending... i hope it's a happy ending though... meaning... Maggie and him together... not the "oh-he-is-still-an-angel-Maggie-doesn't-remember-a-thing-all-is-good-kinda happy" =P [did that make sense??? hope it did =D]
    merry x-mas to you too! enjoy your holidays and of course happy new years eve and everything!!!!
    December 27th, 2010 at 01:05pm