I love this. Please tell me there is a sequel! I freaking will cry if not. You are an amazing writer. Although in the beginning you used some words that weren't right. For example once you used "aloud" when it should have been "allowed". Nothing major besides that it was amazing! Keep up the great work!
I hate you; making me fall in love with Jackson, pfft. Haha, this story was amazing and I don't really hate you c: But that was a damn cliffhanger on the last chapter, miss. Sequel, please? Thanks for writing this, oh my God! :)
This is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read in my life. Despite the fact that you had a lot of grammatical errors, it still was interesting. Too means also, so that is the only time you can use it. You also added capital letters in the middle of your sentences. The word your means that it is possessive. Some that is yours belongs to you. You're means you are. Mother does not need to be capitalized unless it is at the beginning of a sentence of someone's actual name. And lastly, to show possession, you must add an apostrophe before the s. For example, " The bike was Tony's."
awh!! its over. i havent been here since the beginning, but i've been here long enough to know how much work you've put into it. i'm so proud of you!! <3 i cant wait to read the sequel, super excited!! :))
this is actually amazing. it's good enough to be published or even made into a movie, have u been on inkpop? u should put this story on there, people have had their stories published off it and i think the same will probably happen to yours, sorry, i'm blabbering because i'm excited because this is such an amazing story! gah! update soon please
This is really a wonderful story. I've been reading it all day and haven't been able to tear myself away :). I just finishes chapter 44, and after reading: 'perhaps he is something more' my mind definitely went to god hahahhahahahhahah
I utterly adore this story, though it's pretty much done. :( I'm hoping for a happy ending. And a sequel. Definitely a sequel. :) Anyhoo, this story is fantastic, and you're fantastic, and your writing is fantastic, and I'm all done rambling now.
the wait was worth it! =) great story... kinda sad it's ending... i hope it's a happy ending though... meaning... Maggie and him together... not the "oh-he-is-still-an-angel-Maggie-doesn't-remember-a-thing-all-is-good-kinda happy" =P [did that make sense??? hope it did =D] merry x-mas to you too! enjoy your holidays and of course happy new years eve and everything!!!!