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  • tearsofblood

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    it was good....a few grammar mistakes...but over all good. I like the way you use words that are unique. 'macabre scene' was a favorite of mine. take care and keep up the good writing. just watch the grammar. ^_^
    September 16th, 2007 at 05:00am
  • James Sullivan

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    wow...that was deep love.
    it was REALLY good.
    August 3rd, 2007 at 12:10am
  • MCR rocker

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    hi
    August 2nd, 2007 at 06:12am
  • xVampirexHeartx

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    damn...thats pretty deep. Wicked good too. Keep working on it... I wanna read more...lol. :)
    August 1st, 2007 at 09:04am
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