Very i dont know how to say it but....endearing....no thats not it...hmm ill just make what should be a one word explanation...This chapter kinda pulled at you to want more it gave just enough foreshadowing to need more. =D I hope that explained it well.
*First time reader* This is a really good story. I like it alot! OOO! I hope she says yes to Zacky. Cant wait for the next chapter. *goes and subcribes*