Pas de Deux? - Comments

:) Cute ending. And I don't care, I'll read it all the same. Lol.

Awww, I loved the ending to the story!
And, of course Max would be calmed down by the blonde in the front row, haha. And, he'd go find her afterwards. Max will always be Max!
Kris and Violet are like the most adorable couple, and it'll be sad to see them (and Max) go, but as you know, I'm looking forward to your new story.
Oh, and you had to go in there and throw out Brent Seabrook's name, didn't you? As much as I love him (and, I'm sure you already know how much I adore him), I'm still leaning towards Laich. But, as I've said before, I'll read about anyone that you write. So, you pick what you want =)

Great story!!! I like Brent better.

I'm gonna miss this story! Kris and Violet so cute together I loved the ending. Max was so cute I loved him! For your next story I don't know who to pick I mean they're both studs! But I'm going to lean towards Brooks Laich only because there aren't that many stories about him but if you end up writing about Brent i'll be just as happy =D

Awe last chapter???

Well, I loved it all and this was seriously a perfect ending. I laughed at the part where Max said he "corrupted her," Lol.

Kris was just to sweet in this story, it'll be sad to see it end! And as for your next story, I saw "Brent Seabrook" and I was like, I don't even need to read the other guy's name, I want Brent. But then I peeked, and I was like Oooooh Brooks Laich.

So, I'm torn. Lmfao!

Aww, no I don't want it to be over.
Violet & Kris are too damn cute.
And goodness, I love Max.

As for the next story...I can't choose between the two of them.
Neither of them gets enough love!

I don't know what you were planning, but you definitely didn't ruin this story in my opinion. I love this story, as I'm sure you already know!
Now, I'm going to warn you that this may be a long comment since I'm talking about the last two chapters, but here we go...
I felt bad for Violet since she got so nervous since it might have been her first time and all, but I'm glad that Kris didn't push her too far. He's like the perfect boyfriend =)
And, I love how Max came in there and helped fix everything. I could totally see Kris freaking out afterwards, wondering if Violet was going to hate him and all.
Her conversation with Max was hilarious, going all off-topic and such.
And, Max losing the bet and having to wear pink lipstick, absolutely priceless!
I'm sad it's almost over, but I can't wait to read the end and more from you in the future!
And, that's the end of this huge comment =)

Psha, there was no 'ruining' of this story.
First of all, Uncle Maxie...that just cracked up.
Actually, Max period cracked me up with his ADD and his little anecdote and all.
Oh & I love how you brought up the seal thing cause now I have the urge to go watch the video from Sweden where TK asks if seals have ears.
Can't wait for more. :]

Oh wow, you cranked another one out fast! Haha. Seriously, Max is hysterical in this story, I love it! And I'm glad Kris and Violet worked everything out. Can't wait for the next one!

OOH. That was hawt. Even if it ended kind of awkwardly, haha. I hope Violet tells him how she feels! Update soon! (And Thanks for your comment on my Brent one shot =) )

Even if it was a filler chapter, it was a good one!
Oh Max, he's too funny.
And her checklist was cute.
Can't wait for more. :]

OMG. Max had me cracking up through this whole thing! And then tying her laces together! Oh god. Priceless =)

And I thought it was cute the way they woke up next to eachother, and her checklist was great!

Ugh. Tanger is just too sweet =)

Fantastic!
Max was , as usual, hilarious. I love how he just pops up everywhere, and hiding under the table? I was laughing out loud!!
blahhhh I can't stand Ashley. I wish vioet could have kept being mean, gr.
Bu I can't wait for more :D

I loved that chapter! And, I find it kind of funny (not in a bad way, of course) that Violet couldn't be mean to Ashley, even when she's trying to steal her boyfriend! And, Max hiding underneath the table was hilarious. Especially with him untying Ashley's shoes. He's always thinking ahead! And, I loved Kitty's list that Violet had to go through, especially the random Poptarts question thrown in there. And, as you can see, I could keep going on about everything I enjoyed in this chapter, but it would end up being a longggg comment (even longer than this already is). So, I'll just end with, update soon!!

mollywolly:

I'm commenting this as I'm reading it and I could SO see Max acting like that.
(first few chapters)

I'm so excited people are actually writing about hockey players!%$#
haha I'm from Pittsburgh.. hence I love the STANLEY CUP CHAMPS

^^^ are you me?
hahah I really could see Mr. Talbot acting like that

I'm commenting this as I'm reading it and I could SO see Max acting like that.
(first few chapters)

I'm so excited people are actually writing about hockey players!%$#
haha I'm from Pittsburgh.. hence I love the STANLEY CUP CHAMPS

You give Max the best lines...and I love it!
So cute about the I love yous.
And I laughed out loud at the shiny leotard thing...picturing it in my head was scary.
Can't wait for more! :]

OHHH!! And I forgot to mention, I LMFAO'd at the whole thing with Max in the changing room. Classic!

Awe, Kris is so sweet! And I'm really glad no one seems to like the Space Whore, so kudos to the guys for that one, haha!

AND omg, they LOVE eachotherrrr! =) *Sigh* Good times.

I love max in this because with his accent I can't totally hear him saying all these things!!!
Kris is just too adorable for words. That Ashley girl, well I hope something bad happns to her because I don't like her.
But anyways, loved the update as always. Can't wait for moreee