Ughh...I don't like Ashley at all. But, I'm glad Kris told her he loved her! And, Max in his pink outfit! Absolutely hilarious!! They would give him the bright pink one, wouldn't they? More soon??
Aww, he was asking about 'his girl'! And, I love how he thought it was Max that had hurt her again! Seriously, they are like the cutest couple ever. And, I'm already hating Ashley, the "Space Whore" haha! I can't wait for more!
And, I liked how Violet was a little forward there and stepped up and kissed him, since it appeared Kris was going to be too shy to! They are so cute together!
Oh, and the rating/star system here is a little bit different. Readers can't rate the stories. You get stars by how many readers and subscribers you have. I think it's like one star for every 15 subscribers, and one star for every 50 readers. So, a lot of times, amazing stories will only have a couple of stars because they don't get a lot of readers. It's not always fair, but that's how Mibba does it.
Although it would have been hot if Kris spun her into his arms and kissed her, it was in fact much more gentlemanly to spin her into his arms and talk to her first, haha!!
Aw, poor Tanger, thinking Max was going after his girl =)
And, seriously, I am loving this story, and I can't wait for more!
Oh, and if you ever need anyone to beta/edit your chapters, just let me know, and I can help you out. But, really, this story is amazing. You always leave me wanting more!
Okay, so Kris is like the sweetest guy ever! Where can I find one of him???
And, please don't let Max get in the way. He can totally become her best friend and all, but it would be terrible to have them fighting over her. Well, kind of, I mean, if it were me they were fighting over, I wouldn't complain =)