Hold Me Close, I'll Kiss Away Your Fears - Comments

  • Rachelish

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    Best ever absolutely fucking loved it even if I missed a full smutt story ;) awesome awesome job
    July 30th, 2013 at 05:25pm
  • RhodieDeathbat

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    Love this!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 05:18am
  • cynicalqueen

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    Awww, such a sweet ending to an adorable story! I agree with Cat too with the whole shift in power in "Mean Girls." Ahhh, so good.
    October 13th, 2011 at 03:38am
  • SaveMeVictim

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    I love it!!!
    October 9th, 2011 at 09:15pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    Oh, wow. I can honestly say that I didn't see that coming with Laney being the one who put Sarah's name into the running. Even though now it seems kind of obvious haha. But it was so awesome how Zack stood up for Sarah in front of the whole school and Stephanie stood up to Laney. It kind of reminded me of the ending for Mean Girls where the position of power in 'girl world' is changed.

    I loved the ending where he finally confessed his feelings to her! It honestly makes me want to know what happens next, like I was thinking of what the characters would be like once they go away to college because I have a feeling that Sarah might be a changed person. Idea for a sequel perhaps? Haha! Even though I know you struggled to complete this story, but it's just a thought. ;) I think it could be interesting.
    October 9th, 2011 at 04:30pm
  • insanetrain

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    I wanna give Sarah a big hug :D
    She's so lucky!
    Best story ever ;D
    October 9th, 2011 at 02:38am
  • headrushxreeta

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    aww that ending was super cute~ i loved this story hehe
    October 8th, 2011 at 09:31pm
  • Say Goodbye.

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    Beautiful ending....loved it all. <3
    October 8th, 2011 at 02:11pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    the most adorable ending!
    sad to see this go! but i loved every minute of it1!
    October 8th, 2011 at 09:23am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    :O
    October 7th, 2011 at 05:24pm
  • SaveMeVictim

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    Great chapter!!! Please update soon
    October 7th, 2011 at 01:25pm
  • PineappleScream275

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    Aaargh! I wanna know what happens! Damn those cliffhangers!! =DD
    October 4th, 2011 at 07:03pm
  • headrushxreeta

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    You're killing me smalls!! Lol
    October 3rd, 2011 at 04:59pm
  • SaveMeVictim

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    I can't wait for next chapter!!
    October 3rd, 2011 at 02:13pm
  • HeartFailure

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    Why?? Why would you do that?? Why let Zacky get as far as "Sarah...I..."?? What he should do is just grab her and kiss the very life out of her =D
    Loved it!! x
    October 3rd, 2011 at 08:07am
  • Catfreak28

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    She had better win... : )
    October 3rd, 2011 at 04:57am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    ohhhh this is gonna be good!
    October 3rd, 2011 at 02:13am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Awwwwww!
    Something bad is about to happen tho. :(
    October 3rd, 2011 at 01:35am
  • cynicalqueen

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    I agree with the others about how the dress matched the colour of his eyes, that's adorable! Although, Laney saying anything worries me.
    October 3rd, 2011 at 01:03am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    loved it!
    loved that her dressed matched his eyes! so cute!
    October 2nd, 2011 at 08:57am