I have a bit of a gulity pleasure for slash :tehe: I don't really know who this is about, but it's sure to be good.
I love how you described Vince dancing in front of the mirror instead of getting dressed. You made it come off in this really cute little kid kind of way.
I really like the line He constantly looked into mirrors to make sure he wasn't uglier than usual. There's something about it that just struck me the right way.
I love how you said he wanted to have girl hips and lips. How he considered wanting to be a woman was great too. And I love how he tried on the name 'Maria' and tried it with his last name and wished people would call him it.
The descriptions and the voice you put into it is very, very great. I can imagine everything. I can imagine the type of person Vince would be just from those small descriptions. The voice is very well developed also. I love it.
The scene where Howard just walked in on Vince was amazing. I can just imagine seeing what he's seeing.
The dialog is awesome too. It's very realistic and it has great flow.
I also love the ending, how it said Vince sighed and they lived happily ever after.
Overall, it was absolutely adorable and I really, really enjoyed reading it. :cute:
I have a bit of a gulity pleasure for slash :tehe: I don't really know who this is about, but it's sure to be good.
I love how you described Vince dancing in front of the mirror instead of getting dressed. You made it come off in this really cute little kid kind of way.
I really like the line He constantly looked into mirrors to make sure he wasn't uglier than usual. There's something about it that just struck me the right way.
I love how you said he wanted to have girl hips and lips. How he considered wanting to be a woman was great too. And I love how he tried on the name 'Maria' and tried it with his last name and wished people would call him it.
The descriptions and the voice you put into it is very, very great. I can imagine everything. I can imagine the type of person Vince would be just from those small descriptions. The voice is very well developed also. I love it.
The scene where Howard just walked in on Vince was amazing. I can just imagine seeing what he's seeing.
The dialog is awesome too. It's very realistic and it has great flow.
I also love the ending, how it said Vince sighed and they lived happily ever after.
Overall, it was absolutely adorable and I really, really enjoyed reading it. :cute: