I feel proud to be the first to comment. I can be able to say the first things about the story. Yippie! :mrgreen: First things first. I love the way you write. It's professional-like work, must I say. :think: But I was kind of confused in the first chapter because there was no summary to briefly tell me what is going on or anything. Like a hint so that I don't get lost. The second chapter got interesting. I liked it. Now I am wondering what the main character is going to do to help her by burning his morals and crawling under her skin and into the "dark path of destruction." :crazy: Its interesting.
First things first. I love the way you write. It's professional-like work, must I say.
:think: But I was kind of confused in the first chapter because there was no summary to briefly tell me what is going on or anything. Like a hint so that I don't get lost.
The second chapter got interesting. I liked it. Now I am wondering what the main character is going to do to help her by burning his morals and crawling under her skin and into the "dark path of destruction." :crazy: Its interesting.
Update soon and give me a shout when you do!