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  • Aria T'Loak

    Aria T'Loak (150)

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    The background of the layout has me slightly dizzy. O.O But I’m going to ignore that and read on. xD This is certainly very different from what I’m used to reading! It was a letter…to an abusive asshole…quite unique. ;) I love how she described how much she loved him, and how she wondered why she wasn’t good enough for him, and then how she realized that he wasn’t good enough for her. I love how she’s questioning if he ever loved her, and telling him that if he did he was a total shit head about it. I didn’t like this one as much as your other stories, simply because it was in letter format and I didn’t get as many details as I’d like. :( But that’s not at all your fault; it’s simply the way a letter goes. ;) Excellent job, my dear!

    <3 Haven
    August 3rd, 2011 at 05:19am
  • iron underneath;

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    armageddon.:
    This was really great :)
    The way you wrote her words, dripping with bitterness and harshness.
    The way she always knew nothing was going to chance, but her love made her hope and stick around.
    The way you can easily paint a picture of what they were together, and how you can imagine how hurt he will be when he reads this.
    Maybe you loved me too. Maybe you still do. But by God, if that's true, you have a funny way of showing it.
    I'm so glad you put that in there :) It just made it seem so much real to me.
    Kudos xD
    I really like this.
    I really agree with her its rlly true. It was very well written and seemed very realistic to me! Loved it!
    August 8th, 2009 at 05:28am
  • armageddon.

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    This was really great :)
    The way you wrote her words, dripping with bitterness and harshness.
    The way she always knew nothing was going to chance, but her love made her hope and stick around.
    The way you can easily paint a picture of what they were together, and how you can imagine how hurt he will be when he reads this.
    Maybe you loved me too. Maybe you still do. But by God, if that's true, you have a funny way of showing it.
    I'm so glad you put that in there :) It just made it seem so much real to me.
    Kudos xD
    I really like this.
    July 31st, 2009 at 06:33pm
  • precious gravy

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    Really lovely job here! Amazingly written =)
    Best of luck in the contest!
    June 22nd, 2009 at 09:27pm
  • Chewy Cheese

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    This was really cute.
    Very well written ^.^
    June 19th, 2009 at 10:54pm
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