I read through this twice and just wow. It's really amazing. The emotions come through really clearly and I love how real the main character is. I can feel her pain and her emotions and you did a really good job of explaining everything. Your style is so vivid and it painted such a clear picture in my head. You created realistic and defined characters in such a small expanse of words. I'm amazing. Awed.
February 4th, 2012 at 07:56pm