October 23rd, 2009 at 05:53am
These updates are always awesome (I don't think I've ever seen any quite so long- and I mean that in a good way)! You wrote Benny's return so that it was believable and not all like, "Oh! I just happened to randomly come back to you Tre because I LOVE YOUUU!"
Instead, you gave her good reason and didn't make it random/coincidental/stupidly reasoned.
Sorry if that made no sense, haha.
Billie Joe's as adorable as ever.