June 23rd, 2009 at 03:02am
I can't express how much I already love this story. Honestly, this is the first fanfiction with a female original character I've read that I could actually get through. I have little to no faith in the genre, but you guys are giving it back to me. :)
I like how the OFC (who is unnamed?) isn't the most stunning thing Tre's ever seen, and how Tre's even got some doubts about being with someone so young. It's the antithesis of every OFC fic I've attempted to read, and I love you guys for it
“I have to ask. You don’t have, like…daddy issues, do you?” ... “My dad’s pretty...pretty awesome. But can we not talk about him w-when we’re doing this?”
My favorite line in this chapter. :lmfao
He's not a pedophile, but it does put something in there that would make someone wonder, if they were able to see inside of his head.
Pretty hilarious, even so.