The Boy Who Never Grew Up - Comments

  • Red Bandit

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    that was so great i'm speechless and can't even leave like a useful comment. good job xD
    January 10th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • beatkeeper

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    that was the best thing i have ever read. like ever.
    i've never cried from reading anything before execpt for now.
    January 7th, 2010 at 10:43pm
  • kusterbeck-

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    ohmygod!
    That. Was. Amazing! I'm still lost of words on how brilliant that was!
    I really hope you write more stories because you're an amazing writer!
    July 16th, 2009 at 10:07pm
  • semisweet

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    AWWWW, THIS WAS SOOOO GOOD!!! YAYYY!!! I love you so much for this, seriously. Thank you for writing a GOOD Pete Wentz story to help balance out the bad ones, haha.

    She told me that one day she’d be reincarnated a mockingbird. I told her that she was crazy and that she was never going to die.

    AND THEN...

    “You were right,” I said to the gravestone as I sat down on my knees in front of it. “You did die just like everyone else.”

    Gahhhhhhhh. That totally ripped my heart out, but it was my favorite part. <3

    I really loved this because it was sad, but it meant something too--you weren't being sad just for the sake of being sad *cough*JODI PICOULT*cough*, which is just as shallow as unrealistic happy endings in love stories, in my opinion. It went a lot deeper than that. And I liked that it was short. That gave it more impact. It wasn't sappy or cliche or anything, just heartbreaking and genuine and...well, good, haha.

    I liked it very, very much. Good job. You should definitely, DEFINITELY write more! :D
    June 26th, 2009 at 07:59am
  • TheRibbonOnMyWrist

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    :) I'm so proud!! This is a truly wonderful one-shot, Ari. I really hope you'll consider posting more here :)
    June 25th, 2009 at 04:27am
  • JustOffAKeyOfReason

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    aw, that was sad :'(
    my mom LOVES that book haha
    June 24th, 2009 at 07:50am
  • OMG TOAST!

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    gosh, this story is so beautifuly sad..

    it's actually the first time i cried of some story in mibba!! and a one shot?! (you're probebly pretty satisfied right now, huh?) stupid, stupid tears!

    the funniest part is that i made fun of my friend for crying over not so sad story!- i deserve it! damn payback!!

    ha, but it was beautiful..
    i hope you'll write more (can they please be, uh, happier?)

    oh, i'm Gally, by the way=)

    see ya=)
    June 22nd, 2009 at 07:30pm
  • WonderlandRABBIT

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    This was beautiful. I loved it!
    June 22nd, 2009 at 06:39am