The Boy Who Never Grew Up - Comments

that was so great i'm speechless and can't even leave like a useful comment. good job xD

that was the best thing i have ever read. like ever.
i've never cried from reading anything before execpt for now.

ohmygod!
That. Was. Amazing! I'm still lost of words on how brilliant that was!
I really hope you write more stories because you're an amazing writer!

AWWWW, THIS WAS SOOOO GOOD!!! YAYYY!!! I love you so much for this, seriously. Thank you for writing a GOOD Pete Wentz story to help balance out the bad ones, haha.

She told me that one day she’d be reincarnated a mockingbird. I told her that she was crazy and that she was never going to die.

AND THEN...

“You were right,” I said to the gravestone as I sat down on my knees in front of it. “You did die just like everyone else.”

Gahhhhhhhh. That totally ripped my heart out, but it was my favorite part. <3

I really loved this because it was sad, but it meant something too--you weren't being sad just for the sake of being sad *cough*JODI PICOULT*cough*, which is just as shallow as unrealistic happy endings in love stories, in my opinion. It went a lot deeper than that. And I liked that it was short. That gave it more impact. It wasn't sappy or cliche or anything, just heartbreaking and genuine and...well, good, haha.

I liked it very, very much. Good job. You should definitely, DEFINITELY write more! :D

:) I'm so proud!! This is a truly wonderful one-shot, Ari. I really hope you'll consider posting more here :)

aw, that was sad :'(
my mom LOVES that book haha

gosh, this story is so beautifuly sad..

it's actually the first time i cried of some story in mibba!! and a one shot?! (you're probebly pretty satisfied right now, huh?) stupid, stupid tears!

the funniest part is that i made fun of my friend for crying over not so sad story!- i deserve it! damn payback!!

ha, but it was beautiful..
i hope you'll write more (can they please be, uh, happier?)

oh, i'm Gally, by the way=)

see ya=)

This was beautiful. I loved it!