i hate the fact that the main character is so gulible. she doesnt even stand up for herself it's agitating and is the reason i stopped reading ur story
It sad that this story as ended. I really hope that Tonia and Daryl will be able to work things out now they're offically getting married. the best luck to both. great story.
I can't believe that Darl would hurt a baby like that. I mean I don't understand why Darl hates tonia no bad? Great update and hope you have fun in your cross-country camp.
I'm kinda confused on who's talking when, and who william and justin are in the story. Is justin the boyfriend? Kyle the brother? Willi another brother? Sorry. Otherwise great story! I'm only on chapter 3