October 6th, 2009 at 05:03am
I don't usually read many stories on this site, but when I started reading this one, I didn't stop till the finish, and then I read it over again.
I love the style of the writing - like a letter of scripted pain the character knows too well, has mulled over endlessly, and finally put to paper, speaking the truth for the first time though written words.
It's reminiscent of actual letters in the respect of being a calm flood of words one has too oft turned over in their mind, and its rawness and brutal honesty brings it alive with easy eloquence.
Ten stars!!
You have a lot of talent ^^.