You Mustn't Give Your Heart To A Wild Thing - Comments

That was ADORABLE.
I love how Sam calls Verity on all her shit, it's the best. They do fight like sisters.
And I love how determined Alex is! And the wounded puppy part, omg. I felt so bad for Alex when Sam said that. :)

her expression was unreadable to the point where I was unsure whether she was preparing to hug or junkpunch me.
That. Is. So. Me.
This was brill. I can't wait for the next chapter and find out what Alex and Oliver are planninggggg.

Another fab chapter, and more of the forever charming Alex. I just started my pharmacy degree, so I know how you are feeling :)

I don't know who Glenn Saitch is, but if he's a bad influence then I think he's probably fabulous.

I was super happy when you updated, man. I've got to go to work and have people yell at me for hours so I've got to take the awesome things when they come.
Alex annoys me a bit only because he's so damn likable in this story. And I don't want to like him because Oli and Vee are made for each other. Absolutely destined. Gah.

A cliffhanger, no fair...but I still loved it!

and young thomas has gotten quite sassy...

WHAT'S HE GONNA SAY NEXTTTTTTT? :( I like how they're both nervous and oli comparing himself and alex. and alex's line about why he bothered. :D

"It took a mere second to clear them forever, yet I knew it would take an eternity to even come close to clearing them from my mind."

You always start your chapters out in the best way possible; I seem to be in love with the way you compose the first few sentences. But of course I love all the other sentences, too. Ahah.

It's interesting to see how Oliver is acting now. I love to see how much he has been missing Verity, because it's nice to see him portrayed this way. I do hope he finds her though, because I know something epic will for sure happen when they are reunited. I just can't even imagine how it'll happen though.

And what a cliffhanger. Only two more chapters until we find out what he said! Hah. I can't wait. :]

What a cliffhanger, and now we need to wait for not the next update, but the one after that! I want Oli and Alex to find her, but I can visualise a big Da Vinci Code style trail of clues to find her with Oli and Alex fighting to get to her first. Or maybe my thoughts are running away with themselves a bit now .... :D

So she's not there. But Alex and Oli teaming up to find her? That sounds brill.
And TOM! Omg, he's getting sheisty, that little shit. Makes me want to kiss his face off a little bit. ;)
Haha so now we just have to figure out where Verity is. And I'm pretty sure she's not with Sam.
Does Tom know? I feel like he would.
Gah, what a little shit!

This was amazing. You always leave me wanting more. :D

i kinda really hate you right now for the whole leaving me in suspence. Like it will keep me thinking for awhile, oooooo the possibilities. i am guessing its not i love her, cause fuck that would be predictable... something fucked up like i am her cousin. man i would lol so hard. love xx

MY GOD. my internets been fucked up for like ever, so i only just read the last two chapters. first off. I would totally attend your emily'stwentfirstbirthday/warperdtour2010/holiday.. thing. But i am sadly still in school, broke- and have parents who are cunts. haha.
I'm rather glad oli's sort of being nice to curtis. sort of. and fuck mmmmmman! alex gaskarth has recently won my heart, and im meeting him in exactly 193 days! (i have a countdown because i am, that cool) And btw, im about to go follow you on twitter. (:

I won't lie, I completely forgot about Oliver and Verity during this chapter. It was sad when I realized that I (should) like Oliver and Verity together better than Verity and Alex. But he definitely appears to be quite the charmer, and I found myself nearly smitten by him in this one. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!

Whoa whoa whoa, Warped 2010/21st Birthday!? When's your birthday?
Because my own 21st birthday happens to coincide with the beginning of summer 2010...
So I like the sounds of whatever your plan is.

Also, Alex had me swooning in this chapter.
I forgot most of what I was going to say about the chapter after I read the note. I have no short term memory whatsoever. And anything that sounds like a party automatically goes to the front of my brain where it can be remembered.

I do enjoy Alex because he is so different from Oli, but I still love Oli. I will forever be an Oli fan, lol. :)

as much as i'm looking forward to the next chapter, i'm also eager just to read it to get back to verity's perspective. i like how she gives two shits less about alex's fame and him trying to charm her she just constantly dismisses it. i like that she puts him in his place and brings him back down to earth and he becomes a person again and not just a name that goes with an ego. i think he's good for her for the time being.

Man, you've got me falling for Gaskank all over again. And that's saying a lot, seeing as he's falling down my list pretty quickly. And that's also saying something, seeing as I wrote about no one but him for almost a year.

Anyway, that's all beside the point. This chapter was amazing.
I love how Verity has changed. And hasn't at the same time. And how they both have two sides to them.
I'm wondering how this relationship is going to end up working out, since they both seem so stubborn.
But hey, was Verity always a vegetarian? Because I remember her eating meat in 05, but now she's not in 07, and I can't remember if she did when she got back from LA.
Did she stop because of Oliver? Because that would make me shit. Hahaha.

I'm really beginning to take a shine to Alex, he just seems so presistant and charming :) x

"I'd found that vodka had always tickled lightly at my throat, whilst whisky scorched, without an ounce of compassion.

I'd found that girls could grab my attention with a longing look, whilst Verity had me by the scruff of the neck, without so much as a glance.

It was vodka in my glass, but I would always prefer whisky. It was a blonde gazelle 'model type' in my bunk, but I would always prefer my tiny, awkward brunette."

That was definitely one of my favorite beginnings of a chapter. It's really a great comparison of everything, and how much he's thinking about Verity now. I love how completely hung up he is on her now, because of all of this. And she's still no where to be found. But perhaps in Baltimore? I sure hope so.

My dearest Gaskank is in Baltimore, does that mean Verity is with Alex?
love this story :-) xox

VERITY IS IN BALTIMORE.
Or Alex Gaskarth is, at least. I know that for certain. Ohhhh I'm so excited! So I'm thinking Verity is either in Baltimore with Alex, hiding in LA with Sam, or maybe Sam is in Baltimore too.
I don't know. But I do know that you just brightened my suckass week with this update. I love Curits and Oli, and Tom. I love it all. I don't even know what else to say.
So does this mean Curtis and Oli are friends again? Because I feel like you're going to have Curtis leave the band anyway, because he really did. Of course, the night of my show, the jerk. Couldn't wait until he was out of Orlando, had to do it right then.