May 3rd, 2011 at 03:31am
Fucking hell XD
Um, I'll just say that this is the first Waycest I've ever read and I'm actually kind of glad that I got to read this type of story first because it's not heavy at all and incest can be kind of intimidating. I've also never really read MCR stories, but I'm sure you've got the characters down pretty well, at least that's what I gather from the previous comments.
I liked Frank in this even though he was barely in it. When they spoke on the phone was funny because I've been in similar situations where some drunk person asks you to meet them somewhere and you just don't go because you know they probably won't even remember asking.
I'm glad that you didn't have the two of them waking up together cause that would have been super awkward. But I found the last bit, though it had to be said in a story like this, really odd and really unrealistic. If I had found out that I slept with my brother when I was drunk and woke up before he did, I would not tell him what had happened. It would be something that I would just harbour and I would let him think that he had brought someone up to the room. That was the only thing that didn't sit right with me. Other than that, it was a pretty good story.
I have to say that this was amazing.[:
I loved it, a LOT.