This Picturesque Life - Comments

THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY EVER! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! Can I just marry it? Or I can just marry Halvo, doesn't matter. This is fucking amazing!!!
I just wanted to kill Kevin. but then I thought I can't do that to John :(
and Halvo is just amazing<3.
you, my lady are definitely one of my favorite authors now.

Amazing story, I cried like a bitch.

ahh, finally read this. loveeddd it! (:

This story was fantasic from begining to end, and I beg to write as well as you.
I loved it, and it feels so bitter sweet, but just perfection and
Halvo stories don't get any better than this.

~fallOUT

aww i love the ending, great story :D

MEGZ I LOVED THIS SO MUCH YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW.
AND MY GOD I AM GOING TO MISS IT!

aw i can't wait for the last chapter

aw i can't wait for the last chapter

I AM SO SAD THIS IS COMING TO AN END.
MY GOD MEGZ IT CAN'T END OK? OK.
But I loved it and I love you.

yay they are back together :D

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!
Finally back together!!!!
AHHH this just made my day :D
I love you!! <3 ahah

SEX SEX SEX!
I am so freaking glad they made up.

Awwww finally.
&What's better than makeup sex? Aha.
The guys are gonna be so happy they got back together.
update asap.

I love the update.
:]
I'm excited for what is next.

Now I'm a little upset,
but this one fantastic story!
I might be in love with this!

im excited for the end of this (:
update soon PLEAASEE

Eric is too cute with the relationship he has with Ashley :)

Yay no more Amy(: aha
he needs to win her back!
Update soon.

amazing update.
I can't wait for more.

I just started reading this and I love it! (:
he needs to go back to her already!!