This Picturesque Life - Comments

So, I'm going to love you, eh?
Halvo better man up and mack on Olivia, duhh!

ughhh i just found this story. but i love it.
erics a dumby.
get back with olivia.

NO! HALVO NEEDS TO EFFING GO BACK TO OLIVIA!
kthxbai

I love the story so far and how its progressed! =] Please update the story! I really loved it and I want to see the outcome of Eric's actions.

wtf eric, lol

I just wanna punch him.

aawww they need to get back together
my heart is like breaking while reading this

This is probably my top favorite story right noww. It's actually given me motivation to work on writing mine!(:

Not even gonna lie, love this story and I'm glad to make it my first Halvo story to read.

Untle Nick.

That's great family right there (x

i love this story. so amazingly written. write more soon? please

Yay! Another one. (:

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Continue

I love this story,
Eric's kind of being a jerk, jeez Halvo!

You jerk, how hard is it to believe your girlfriend.
What's you're problem?
That's how I feel about it.

By the way, Ashley,
she sounds like a complete cutie!
Love her!

Olivia seems very nice,
sweet, faithful,
yeah, I said it,
I said FAITHFUL, Halvo, jerk...

Yay!

this is great! more? dumb kevin...id give him a black eye too..grr...

stickkkkkkky, but good. :D
Can't wait for more! :]]]]

Love this so much. Happy you updated. If only Eric would resolve his problems instead of drinking then things would be happy. But then again, what kind of story would that be? ha ha

John is such a sweetheart!
And Tania and I hopefully helped Olivia :]

Ahhhhh, proceed(: I want to know what happens next(: