Sincerely, Anonymous. - Comments

That was amazing. The letter showed such strong emotion toward the reciever of the letter. Giving little stories here and there, also helped make the story stronger. The layout worked well with it too, i thought it was a nice touch. I'm confused by a couple of things, but thats what makes the story. The what if's are suppose to be in a story.

Wow, that was pretty much wicked, but I couldn't help but get a little bit confused about her brother. Is he dead? Also, her little brother? By blood, or just real good friends? The ending doesn't really clear up my questions. Though, pushing that aside and focusing on how she described her pain... That was enough to make me feel sad.