July 5th, 2009 at 08:55pm
I liked this alot! You should've seen my mouth drop when I read the bit where it told us that Andreas was a teacher, I was like, "Ooooh!" :XD
I felt this story was very cute, if a little...sad? Almost at the end. I found myself feeling really angry toward Eric, and although there was only one sentance that stated how Andreas was feeling when Eric said, "I knew I'd lose my virginity before ending school", you could totally understand how awful he must've felt in that split second. Almost, used?
I liked that the sex scene wasn't overly described- but thats just more my preference. :cute: And the way it was written was enough to make you understand the passion in that moment. Which, until the end, you don't quite realize is only one sided.
You also described Eric perfectly, and exactly right. :tehe:
One of my favourite bits about the story was that there was alot of second guessing on Andreas's part. You can understand that he knows that it's wrong, but he is lusting so much after Eric that he can't help himself. You can tell this by the bit where he says, It was less than a week, then he wouldn't see the boy again.
He wasn't sure just yet if this was a good thing or a bad thing.
Overall, very good. And I wish you luck for the competition. :cute:
I'll still give you ~thoughtful review instead. or try.
obviously I loved this, even if it wasn't my favourite thing you have written. I really liked the beginning and somewhat!confused Andy while Kitten was being all confident and knowing what he was doing (even if he faked it with innocence - like we believe him anymore :hand: ). I liked that the sex wasn't too detailed described as well, it shows that it wasn't much more than a quick fuck, caused by lust from Andy's side and being.. kind of calculating bitch from Kitten's side. I kind of feel bad for both Andy and Kitten, but more Andy. I loved that ending, though, it wasn't cliche as I'd expect.
so yeah, overally . :arms: