We Can Settle This Affair - Comments

Megasaurass:

Oh, i forgot.
One criticism.
The layout is the most annoying thing EVER.
You have to scroll, down and from side to side all at once to read the writint.
Urgh.
Thought i'd share.

I'm on it! And thanks for your review. Mikey might fancy her, I haven't decided yet but he might be just a good friend.

who.sold.out?:

Gerard=dickface. but i love it. god. why must I fall in love with eeeevil?

Welcome to the club, sister. lol. We're called 'the evil lovers'

Hiding_behind_Smiles:

Holy shit. Update soon. I need to know what happens. I mean that was the best chapter I've read.

Thank you so much!

GeeandBobrockmysocks:

le gasp what is he going to do with her?!?!!?

MORE SOON PRETTY PLZ WITH SUGAR ON TOP!

Damn you, you know I can't resist to sugar!

Dead.Demented.Cool.:

Okay, so feedback from one of your bitches!
No, not too dramatic. I love drama.
Gerard is being a fucking dick and I wanna gouge out his eyes with a pencil. He's probably gonna rape her or stab her or something that involves hurting her. But then again, you can't rape the willing. But maybe she's not willing anymore... Gah.
I'm sorry, but I just had a visual image of Gee and Viola as parents... My poor, tainted mind!
Anyway, I say she should hook up with Mikey to make Gerard totally pissed off.
And just 'cause it's Mikey.

I'm glad you liked it. I like drama too but I don't like overdoing it.

Maia.:

ZOMG. awesome update. more soon? xx

Of course!

Keep writing! I love this story so much

Too much drama?? XD XD Seriously, I looooove drama, especially your drama ^^.

I just re-read it again, and Viola is going to get raped either that or Gerard is super creepy. I wish Mikey wasn't so tiny so he could bust open the door with magic Mikey Powers! But damn he's just a twig.

Does Mikey have a thing for Viola as well? If so that would be super cool. So in my mind Mikey likes her to. So I'm rooting for Mikey to get the girl, if he even likes her lol.

Oh and if I could imagine what rape would be like, the last few chapters in the last chapter are so it.

Oh please hurry with the next chapter I am dying to know what happens. I need my crack LOL

Not enough plot?!?!!
Are you fucking kidding?!?
I don't think that will be an accusation EVER swung your way Jay!

So...I'm really happy with Viola that she told Gerard, I didn't think she would.
I loved that Mikey was all "to the rescue" and mr. first aid! It was absolutely adorable, I must say! hehe

Now, let's talk about this, because, clearly, she's not in a very good situation, at least, at the moment. Although I should hate Gerard and fear for Viola since he's being slightly deranged and violent at the moment, I find myself, instead, cheering him on!!
I mean, no, I don't want him to hurt her, but, after all she's put him through, I'm glad that he's standing up to her. I'm glad he's finally defending himself, and Diana (even if for once Viola is right!) I hated that he just let her punch him in the gut and walk away with a smile all the time; it wasn't right.
That's not to say that I want him to hurt her! I don't!!! Please don't let him actually get violent and do something he's going to regret! Diana has done more than enough traumatizing, Gerard does not need to join in the "beat Viola parade"!!!

So...UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!! :D

Cheers
Kat

If he rapes her I'm going to kick his ass.
That's right. You heard me. I went there.
I will jump through the computer screen, into the Universe of Viola, and I will grab Gerard by the throat and proceed to kick his ass.
And then I will kiss Mikey on the cheek, because he's a sweetheart.

But JESUS FUCK GERARD! You KNOW it's true! Your girlfriend is a FUCKING BITCHFACE! How can you not notice that? And please, just tell me this--I fucking know that Viola isn't exactly the most angelic teenage girl on the planet, but WHY, for FUCK'S SAKE, why would she forcibly carve five letters into her stomach hard enough to leave scars?! She's fucked up, but she's not a fucking masochist, and you of all people should know that!

I'm on Team Viola now. DOWN WITH GERARD THE JACKASS! DOWN WITH DIANA THE BITCHFACE!

It's amazing how you can do that, though. A few chapters ago I was ready to slap Viola very very hard, but now I want to throttle Gerard for even threatening to hurt her in the slightest bit. It's awesome how you can switch views like that, to reveal what characters are really like without going into a whole angsting session.

And no, I didn't think this chapter was pointless, I thought it was a good confrontation between the two of them. They need to get all the negative energy out.

But even after all that, I'm still hoping he won't hurt her, that he'll see the light and realize that she's just an idiot who's in love with him, and he's just an idiot who's in love with her.

And that Diana will fuck off and go to Texas.
That's right, Diana Bitchface! I said it! I went there! Just you try and hurt me, I'll sic Cyriacus on you and he'll tear you to shreds!

Update soooooon.

Oh, i forgot.
One criticism.
The layout is the most annoying thing EVER.
You have to scroll, down and from side to side all at once to read the writint.
Urgh.
Thought i'd share.

Oh my GOD!
GERARD'S GOING TO RAPE HER. [I hope, lol]

Something steamy is sooo going to happen.
That chapter was just brilliant!!
I really wana read more :D
I really think Mijey might fancy Vi? No?
And Gerard is a pshychooooo, but in a good way.

Ilove this story!! xDD
Cant wait for more.
Like, now. ;)

Gerard=dickface. but i love it. god. why must I fall in love with eeeevil?

Holy shit. Update soon. I need to know what happens. I mean that was the best chapter I've read.

le gasp what is he going to do with her?!?!!?

MORE SOON PRETTY PLZ WITH SUGAR ON TOP!

Okay, so feedback from one of your bitches!
No, not too dramatic. I love drama.
Gerard is being a fucking dick and I wanna gouge out his eyes with a pencil. He's probably gonna rape her or stab her or something that involves hurting her. But then again, you can't rape the willing. But maybe she's not willing anymore... Gah.
I'm sorry, but I just had a visual image of Gee and Viola as parents... My poor, tainted mind!
Anyway, I say she should hook up with Mikey to make Gerard totally pissed off.
And just 'cause it's Mikey.

ZOMG. awesome update. more soon? xx

lolllmolly:

UPDATE!

OK! god, the pressure! lol