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Chapter 9:

2 Months?!
Nothing happened for two months? You are mean.

Wow, that was a sad - first bit of a chapter... :D?

Oh, God. There she goes again with the whole putting herself in danger thing again. *sighs* Some people are so despeate...

Yay for Maddy! She can kick those asshole's asses! (Hahahahaha, I laughed just thinking of how stupid I must sound saying that.. Hahaha)

Yeah, they better be back soon. *does that snapping thing*
...
*sighs* If only I could snap...
*gasp* I'll go get RiceKrispies... I mean Bubbles!

Chapter 8:

Jimmy jumped up and down in excitement and wrapped me in a massive hug, That made me smile :D
Amazing, considering my... Umm, predicament? (I don't even think I spelt that right. I'm a failure as a Spelling Nazi...)

Oooh, you're not mean to Christ, huh? You just called him weird!And somehow I'm smiling while typing that...
I should've known that readin this would make me happy. There are so many retarded things I can say to you, without fear of being judged :D

Dude, how long did it take you to come up with all these background stories? Like, I couldn't fill a chapter with half of that information if my life depended on it.

Nturally weird! There you go again. Dude, you lied to me.

Wow, this one had a lot of crying in it. Ironically, I was crying right before reading it...
Man, I think God's playing mind games with me, or something...

Chapter 7:

Holy... Oh my.. What the... GAH!

The story with Degan, it was all intense, and interesting. Just, wow.
And then the whole Vercro thing.

Why does this story have so many good names? Osmo, Vercro, like, seriously?

OMG, Degan's still alive? Why the hell am I asking, it's probably in one of the other hmm... twenty four chapters.

*double fricken gasp* Are you serious? No, that's not going to happen, because you're no that mean,,
Oh, who am I kidding? You've already proved to me that you're that mean. Meanie.

Oh, and also, I've noticed that in this whole time, I haven't once given you a wowzers, soo...

Bye.

(Didn't see that coming, huh? Yeah, I'm good with surprise endings, too.)

...

Fine.
Wowzers.
And, I even bolded it for lost time :D

Chapter 6:

Ah, dude, a matching toilet? Sorry, that's just amazing. Ah-maze-zing.

I love how she didn't know who Syn was. I actually smiled at that :D

Haha, sexiest uncle ever. I'm not laughing because it's stupid, but because it's true. Yeah, I laugh at true things :D
And just forget I said stupid. I'm not denying that that would be Ah-maze-zing as well.

Oh, God, her friends texts are hilarious. Little leprechauns who steal lunches? That reminds me of one of my one shots, and the little blue people who eat toes :D
(Don't ask)

Haha, Jimmy and pancakes :D
That's officially the best thing you've ever written. That one sentence. Actually, only that one part of that sentence. Why, you ask? It make me smile and giggle :D

Wow, Zacky's a little overprotective...
I like it :D (Yes, lots of things can make me smile. Get over it.)
Dude, dead heart? You're ruining it.

Yay for awkward people!! I gotta tell you, I'd do the exact same thing in that situation. I'm just way to awkward to stop now.

Haha, you're so mean to Christ. Well, in your writing, anyways. So little room. Pssh.
I actually did laugh at that, though. If not, I smiled. I just couldn't help myself.

You weren't happy about this chapter? I rather enjoyed it :D
(Don't make fun of my use of the word 'rather'. I stole your connections with the Korean Mafia.)

Chapter 5:

Dude, the beginning. Damn Layton.
If I haven't said it yet - *scrolls up and checks* No I haven't - I really don't like him.
Scratch that, I hate him.

Oh, God, Miley Cyrus. If I were her, his whole vampireness wouldn't even stop me. I'd start yelling and screaming at him right then and there. Sorry, Layton, but I only listen to good music.

Hehehehehehe, I like how you described Zacky (although, that was to be expected...).
I also enjoyed their little conversation, although I've already forgotten it.

Oh, boy, do I know that 'So where the hell am I sleeping tonight' feeling. It's that feeling I get when I've come to brother's house, right before he shows me to the hard mattress they've "lovingly" dropped on the floor for me.

Chapter Four:

Wow, the dream was like all, intense and stuff. I liked it.
And the blood. Yeah, yeah, not much was mentioned, but whatever. Blood is blood. (And just imagine, I've been thinking like this since I was 8 and a half, or 9.)

The meeting with Liam in the hallway. 'Yeah, I don't really care... Don't touch me.'

Force herself into danger... Well, as long as we - I mean she - gets to see him again :D

I almost laughed at the part where she was all happy that his thoughts were there. 'Oh, as long as I'm being stalked, I'm happy.'

Dun dun duuuuhh.
I'm so happy when I read a chapter with a cliffhanger, and the next chapter is already up. So much more fun than the whole waiting thing :D

Chapter 3:

OOOMMMGGG.
Sorry, I just felt the need to do that.

At first, I didn't get the whole thought thingy ma bobber, but I got it.
Well, near the end, but that still counts.

Hahaha, so like super heroes, but different?
Somehow, that seems slightly familiar... *wink wink*

Ah, dude, I like vampires even less now, and Edward Cullen already made me hate them. (Sorry to any Twilight fans).

Oh, and...
...I forgot what I was gunna say, so yeah.

...Bye...
(Gah, I did it again...)

Chapter 2:

I'm kinda pissed that Avenged Sevenfold isn't in it yet.

*gaaasp* Vampires?
Ooh, I'd say that I didn't see that one coming, but one of the comments before mine said vampire, so I kinda suspected it :D
Or, you could just consider me all knowing :) I could go for that.

Dude, he kissed her. Yaya for Liam!
Why? Because I like nerdy underdogs. God.

Oh, dude. Bad friend. She tells her to call, and then doen't pick up.
Either they aren't gunna be friends later on, or you're just meaner than I suspected.

Okay, I'm gunna comment by chapter, beacuse I'm just that amazing :D
I'm also going to try not read the other comments.

Chapter 1:

Aah, screams. You know what that makes me think of? Scream.
:D

Osmo. That's like the best name for a teddy bear.

I'm confuzzled. And it's all your fault.
But then again, I guess I'm not exactly supposed to know what's going on...
Eh, whatever.

Good job :D
(I will never believe anything you tell me about your stories again, though. Liar.)

=D loved the update! again! haha

amazing update
i am so happy they are happy again
although i have a feeling it will be short lived
update soon please
<3 Michele

Yay! Loved the update! =)

That’s right, gummy bear. Feel my pain.
haha i nearly died laughing, simply because that is something i would say/do
can't wait to see how Zacky protects her and i really hope he doesn't 'die' int he process
update soon please
<3 Michele

loved the update
<33

JOHNNY FUCKING CHRIST NO! D:<

uh oh
i wonder how Zacky is going to react when he finds that out
Poor Kayla, i hope they find a way to get over this obstacle
<3 Michele

JONATHON bad boy hahaha

awwwwwwwwwww yeah this got me so excited! more soon seriously!

Ooh, I'm so excited for the next update! =) I'm hooked on this story, good job =D

Wonder what's going to happen
loved the update
:)