August 2nd, 2009 at 03:42pm
That was kind of creepy, haha. But powerful. You convey a message really easily, even with such a small amount of words. You've got a certain poetry to your writing that just...flows. It's beautiful to read.
The piece is rather nonchalant, especially the last sentence, but you can still feel the meaning and everything. It's like he's casually telling you what's going on, like everything's fine, and then it sets in, the true meaning.
Awesome.
this was so... ugh. rich and beautiful, and it flowed effortlessly. i adored it.
and the end was so... random and perfect :lmfao
i could never have done something as epic as this. {:
you're an amazing writer. keep it up :arms: