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  • Name Of Misery.

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    Good, not too long. The writing was pretty good, I didn't see any typos or anything. One thing that, I don't know if it's a rule or not, but you're supposed to use the little Author's Note box instead of putting your AN in the actual story box. idk if you'll get in trouble or anything...just a heads up.

    Update soon :)
    July 29th, 2009 at 03:07am
  • secrets-that-die

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    loved the update
    can't wait for more
    <33
    July 29th, 2009 at 03:02am
  • jimmy27

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    fucking awesome update lol i loved it.it's deff one of ur best
    July 29th, 2009 at 02:26am
  • Iva...Just Iva

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    Ah! Cliffhanger? You're going to leave us hanging? Man!
    oh wow ur really good! updtes soon!
    July 27th, 2009 at 11:15am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Ah! Cliffhanger? You're going to leave us hanging? Man!
    July 27th, 2009 at 07:47am
  • Name Of Misery.

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    Good, especially since it's longer. I like longer chapters.

    Update soon :)
    July 26th, 2009 at 08:30pm
  • GeeandBobrockmysocks

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    WUVS IT!!!
    July 26th, 2009 at 04:48pm
  • Amarante

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    Great update (:
    July 26th, 2009 at 03:33pm
  • lovemelavender;

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    OMG!!! So Billie is with Adie!!
    If he and Shelbie ever hook up it'll make it all the more dramatic and better!!

    =DD

    OMG!! I bet I know what they're gonna ask her!!
    July 26th, 2009 at 01:57pm
  • Checkered Undies

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    ohmygod, this is amazing! it's addictive, i could totally imagine it! :D
    July 26th, 2009 at 08:08am
  • lovemelavender;

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    I just read what you have of this story, and I must say, it's AH-MAZING!

    I loved it! Like, how you didn't let them just run into Green Day first, they had to run into the opening band. She, alone, had to run into Billie Joe through an accident.

    It was genius. I loved every part of it!

    I love Tre's crazy personality. You picture him just as I do. I twelve year old trapped in a 36 year old's body.

    =DD

    It's great it really is.

    Now you've got me curious. Why isn't little missy here getting much sleep that night? Is it because she just found herself unable to fall asleep next to the "oh so wonderful" Billie Joe Armstrong =DD? Was she afraid that if she fell asleep that when she woke up it might all be a dream?

    Or did something happen? O.o

    =DD

    Great story!! Totally diggin' it!

    I hope the next chapter will be out soon!! Plus there's hardly any Billie Joe Armstrong stories on here, anymore. Good one anyway.

    You should feel proud!!

    Viva La Princessa~

    P.S. I think the title you have fits well. =))
    July 24th, 2009 at 04:25pm
  • Amarante

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    Stuck with me, I'd say. She's stuck with the guys, or the other way around xD
    Great chapter! Update soon (:
    July 24th, 2009 at 10:40am
  • charmishgirl

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    don't change the title
    July 24th, 2009 at 12:21am
  • jimmy27

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    either b or c
    July 24th, 2009 at 12:02am
  • Name Of Misery.

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    Nice one. This one was actually written better than the last couple, good job.

    I'd either change it to Hitchin' A Ride or not change it at all. Don't change it to Welcome to Paradise, that's what mine's called! xD
    July 23rd, 2009 at 11:04pm
  • ohghoulina

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    Great job.
    It's not one of those far off fantasy written fanfictions.
    I hope to see more. :]

    BTW you should totally pick Hitchin` a Ride as the title.
    July 23rd, 2009 at 10:35pm
  • VivaLaBAM.

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    i would go with stuck with me cause she was stuck with billie joe in a hotel room
    July 23rd, 2009 at 09:09pm
  • MissMuffet.

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    I think it should be called Hitchin a Ride because she kind of like..gets talked into having them take her where she needs to go. and don't stop writing! I really like it =D
    July 23rd, 2009 at 07:27pm
  • Public Threat

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    Lol I like it but just cause I live in Minnesota and it's mentioned. Their concert rocked my socks off.
    July 23rd, 2009 at 06:28am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    This is so lovely.
    July 22nd, 2009 at 05:53am
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