500 - Comments

It was like you painted an erotic portrait in my mind.

This was sexy, not smutty and I liked it. The way you worded it to make it mean something is spectacular. I like how you weren’t detailing the down and dirty details, you gave us all we need to know without it being XXX, you know?

Gosh, I’ve read this like three times, I think it’s that great. The flow of the words and details. The ending is my favorite though, the line where they say they fell in love and that she left in the morning. A bit sad, but it was perfect.

So I know I already commented, but I wanted to again since my last was basically worthless. This is the all time best sex scene I have ever read. It is absolutely beautiful and powerful and romantic and sexy without being over the top graphic (which don’t get me wrong is good, but just for different reasons). It was written in a man’s point of view which is neat because you never see that and to make it even better and more interesting, the man is the one who falls in love and the woman is the one who only wanted sex. That is such a nice, refreshing and creative take and I loved every minute of reading it.

I love this. Sorry for the short comment...

Wowza! This was a really great word spill - and I'm usually not into word spills at all! I think it was the perfect amount of description and the way you portrayed the emotions during sex was quite amazing. And the last line was great too; how he fell in love (or thought he fell in love) and she left him anyway because she knew it was just sex.

I totally think you deserved to win the contest. ^^

Honestly, this is the best wordspill I have read in a while. I was so excited throughout reading the creation. :cute:
The very first line made if for me. It was sweet, it was blind, it was everywhere. I loved the emotions. It was graphic, but you described the right things. It wasn't smut. It was about a bond you have with a person that you can't get anywhere else. But, my favorite part was how you made the last line her leaving, since stereotypically it would be the man leaving the woman behind. A perfect ten, no doubt about it.

I am so sorry for the wait and lacking comment! I was going to do this great review on the entries, but it came out slightly hard to do with creations under 300 words. I hope this was good enough for you! :shifty