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  • The Superhero

    The Superhero (100)

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    You may have outdone yourself this time. This story makes me want to run and jump and scream and write because it is so good that someone needs to celebrate it.

    The way you write is just so real, I don't even realize that I'm reading. Its like you are inside my head, narrating the things that are going on around me.

    The Joker is back, and scarier than ever.
    December 8th, 2009 at 07:20am
  • dacastardust

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    My god.
    You have no idea how happy I am that you've started writing this!
    SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!
    I'm happier than larry, I tell you!
    And curiouser than George to see where this is going!

    :]
    July 19th, 2009 at 09:13pm
  • Kassaunders

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    I have a very big smile on my face right now.

    I know people are always like 'i got shivers the way you explained that one part!' simply because you used a cool word they haven't heard before, but at the beginning of the second chapter when you explained the wound on her arm, i literally got shivers because of the way you explained it. Very very good. i very much like it.

    And you dedicated it me! what the french? that is so super mega sweet. i am going to click the subscribe button. 'click'
    July 17th, 2009 at 09:32am
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