I like it, but then again I am a sucker for anything in the realms of drug addicted rock stars, aha. But anyways, I didn't see any grammatical errors, and your descriptions were really, really good. I can imagine everything- being backstage, his panic, dependance on the drugs, the feel of shame when the girl holds up the poster. You create a vivid picture, and I feel like it is something that if you really wanted to, you could make longer and go into why he felt this way, how he got into it, etc. Overall, it was good, and i enjoyed reading it .:)
January 8th, 2012 at 04:58pm