Paper Heart. - Comments

I can't say anymore than what everyone else has but oh wow, honestly, one of the best pieces I've read on any writing site. You can tell that this was written completely from the heart and the imagery and the words and the hurt that you feel within every line is just hauntingly beautiful. It's this kind of writing that inspires me to write and makes me feel.

Absoloutely stunning. I literally just went back and read it again and honestly, hand on heart, could have got teary! This is a piece of writing you should always feel proud of.

Heart-wrenching. It made me want to fucking cry. The part about the sticky masking tape, and how even if it peels away, there'll still be traces of where it once tried to hold everything together... absolutely beautiful metaphor. My heart kind of went =( when I read this. Which is a good thing. A very, very good thing.

This was beautiful.
Your description is honestly just perfect. You're so talented and your writing is just so emotional and powerful.
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For such a small piece that was incredibly powerful.

You used metaphors I've never seen used before. Everything fit so well and the flow was perfect. I really don't know what else to say because this doesn't seem a piece I can actually review, but like the comment above ^ I loved the part about the kite strings. The emotion was so vivid, not only there, but throughout the whole piece.

oh god sam, i think my heart just collapsed to somewhere around my stomach, :arms:

This was more than beautiful, it was stunning, brilliant, inspired, raw. I must have read it over ten times straight after you put it up because you just divulge into the speed and the rise of the heart in this. Your words, as ever. even in a ten minute peice are sublimely put together m'love (and i kind wanna find you and hug you to death all the way through)

I was totally sobbing a quarter way through because theres so much feeling just coursing through it and i can relate more than you will ever know. It pretty much demolished my emotions in a kind of inspirational way, if that makes any sense. It hit extraordinarily close to home, as you kind of know with me. But this kind of makes me feel less alone so in a weird way thats my little thankyou for posting this.

'even when you dangle your snapped kite strings ripped by storm-clouds it makes me want thunder of my own. ' will never ever leave my head, just..gahm this peice in general. I'd give a review but I don't think this is the type of thing you can pick apart and analyse, i don't have the strength to. just lord, the power in this m'dear :arms:

xx

That was absolutely beautiful.
you wrote that in ten minutes? wow.
I know its not all paper hearts and butterflies, but even when you dangle your snapped kite strings ripped by storm-clouds it makes me want thunder of my own.
I wish I could convey as much emotion in my writing as you did with this. Your words flow so well and your metaphors are stunning & never awkward.

jeez. ten minutes.

this was so beautiful and sad, and i loved it.
you are seriously amazing. :arms:

Even when you're all drabble-y you write amazing stuff :cheese:
I seriously loved it. Emmie pretty much summed it up :con:
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I don't really listen to Green Day so I read this not knowing what it was about at all and I thought that the whole thing is incredible.

patch me up with that sticky masking tape that won’t last forever but will damn well try. It might rip and tear at the edges but if it ever comes away completely there will always be little lines and traces of where it’s been. I don't think I've ever heard anything as beautiful as that, and I'm being honest when I say that. It's so beautiful. And I can picture everything in my head.

The last paragraph made me fill up, and it gave me butterflies. The emotion is so deep in your writing, and I know I'll never be able to feel exactly the way you feel right now but when I read this it made me feel a little hurt and sad. That's incredible because I've never really experienced that before. And then the last line just tops it all off 'Because my own heart feels like paper too and I’m not sure how long I have left before it rips.' I love the emotion in this line, comparing a heart to paper as if it's fragile and thin - that's amazing. I really wish I was as talented as you, I love your work. Once again, thank you so much for sharing.
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