What I Go To School For. - Comments

Aghhh. The imagery and description in here was just amazing. I had no idea this was a fic (according to some of the other commenters?) but just...wow. Loved it.

I had a dream similar to this last night so I decided to read it again ;)

I have no idea who the guy is, but this was amazing.
I do wish you'd write more to this. :)
It'd make a fantastic story.

x

I loved how you discribed everything, made it seem more realistic.
And the ending, was obviously incredible.
I haven't ever read something like this.
Great job.

THE LAST LINE. THE LAST LINE WAS AMAZING. As was the rest of this. Good job!

i really loved it! And I loved Busted and that song, it was my favorite :D
I really liked how you were descriptive, you're a really good writer!

I totally loved it!!!!!
Will you write any more like this??
Please do!!!

I still think you should send him this :coffee:

It's pure epic win, filled with beautiful descriptions and once again ... akjsngfjknfd :cheese: ness

This was too hot for words.
I love how you describe everything so carefully.
This is by far one of the best I'll ever read

naughty naught hotness. ;]

:cheese: so hot...

zomg.
caught this on the rate the story game thread; couldn't help but read. hang on for a sec while i stop hyperventilating...

alright. that was fabulously kinky and wonderful and all other sort of things i can't really put to words. imma try for a review here so I'm not just babbling.

your first person works so well, I could practically feel myself in her situation. :tehe: Your descriptions are so elequent and flow so well; I could imagine everything just as clearly as though I was watching a movie.
the first three buttons on his shirt were undone, leaving a gaping space between the two ends of the white material. Craning my head slightly, and breaking his eye contact, I could see the defined curves of his muscles and the silky soft touch of his skin. beautiful

I love that you use the words "tresses" instead of, like, strands of hair.and thirty-two other students, that's a massive class.

The partial light in the darkened room emphasised his features, the shaping of his lips - each peak and each fall, the gradient of his nose, and underlined every single lash along his eyelid. That just made me fall in love. It sounds so artistic, like you're drawing him instead of writing about him. And I love when people write "cerulean" eyes instead of just blue, or whatever.

And later, I love when you describe his giggle as "child-like". just the contrast of him being a teacher with this total non-teacher behavior gives me thrills. :tehe:

He ran his lips down my neck, suckling against certain parts of my flesh, causing my knees to buckle and my heart stop for a millisecond. oh hot dayum, I swear my heart nearly stopped too when I read that.

and this: eyes that were once leering at me with fiery ardour and lust were fixated to the front of the classroom That sentence just made me go :cheese:

Absolutely perfectly ironic ending.
I hope this wasn't just me rambling. You are seriously a fantastic writer, I want at least one tenth of your talent. Let's arrange a trade-off, hmm?

ehehehehe

oh vee, you naughty girl. :tehe:
you should definitely send him this, along with a picture of yourself ~~
:shifty

anyway, this made me giggle from start to finish. my favourite part hands down was “That uniform you’re wearing… so hot I can’t stop staring.”:lmfao

well done futuregirl ~~
next time mr bourne will be attending to a naughty mr fletcher, yes? ;;P
xxx

Okay, so you know how much I love this. Or atleast, you should. I squee'd over it enough on msn. :cute:

Listening to What I Go To School For when I read this was just... brilliant. :lmfao I kept laughing and my mum and her friend thought I was crazy, it was magical. ~~

I've got to say, your vocabulary is fantastic :cheese: I want to steal your brain.

OH MR BOURNE ;;P you've seriously made me fall in love with him, just by reading this :3 well, the pervert version of him. :tehe:

the bottom of his shirt slipped out from underneath his belt buckle, leaving the lower part of his abdomen exposed, each muscle contracting beneath the skin this is just kdfnjds, sexyy :yah I love your descriptions so much.

his voice was still capture in my ear drum do you mean captured? i love how the girl -cough-you-cough- starts perving on mr bourne when he crouches over the desk. i'd be so embarrassed if i got caught looking down one of my teachers shirts, but if i had james bourne for a teacher i'd definitely be doing it ;;P

I absolutely adore how you describe all these things to do with anatomy. It's making me fall in love with you ~~ :tehe

The partial light in the darkened room emphasised his features, the shaping of his lips - each peak and each fall, the gradient of his nose, and underlined every single lash along his eyelid. Sorry to c&p all of that, but it's just so gorgeous. :cheese:

I think there's just the right amount of kink in this :con: I love how you put the lyrics in. It wasn't too cheesy, it was lovelyyyy. :3

Damn, it was just getting really sexy and -busted. They got caught. I honestly properly started laughing when I read the last bits. Miss Mackenzie catching them was just immense :tehe:

I really, really hope you make this into a two-shot :]
Sorry for the shite review. I'm really tired and there's a huge spider crawling along the wall towards me and I'm scared >_<
xxxx

My oh my Violet. Now, you know what I'm like with the whole 'sex before marriage' situation so I won't go there :tehe:
I thought it was very well thought out - figures, no wonder you didn't speak on msn for 5 hours :XD I'm joking. You should be extremely proud of yourself my Dear. The whole thing was amazing, and I'm not such a fan of stories like this but I enjoyed it. It was fun to read, it was amazing to see that after all of the time you spent writing it you think it's your best piece. I loved the ending, the busted part was so witty. I love you and I hope you write more stories like this. You deserve all the best with your writing :arms:

omg
that was amazing
i loved it!
and i like pedophile james alot lol
hope you write more!!!!!!!!

You're blatantly imagining yourself as the school girl, Vee :XD
Oh jesus.

I actually can't stop giggling. Nice work... :lmfao ;;P
I'll do a proper comment at a later date, I still owe you a review for Miss You Love (just so you know I haven't forgotten.)

That.Was.Epic. :coffee:
Like forserious, it was incredibly well written and I love how you got the random busted lyrics in there and the Miss Mackenzie bit.
It was really awesome. :tehe:

I like pedophile James too. ;;P

That was so good :D

Oh my God wifey, that was just amazing!
The description, the content, just everything was perfct.
Especially the fact Miss Mackenzie found them!
Pure win! :con:

ily :arms: