Eternal Rest - Comments

For a minute...

I thought I was hallucinating when I saw that you'd updated this. XD

It was rad though.

I loved it. I was kinda sad about it being the end though.

I'll get over it though... besides... I can only imagine what the sequel is going to entail.

Prolly lots of angry, sleep deprived mothers. Lol.

Like I said though... I loved it.

Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck I love this!!! I got serious bone chills man! Fucking awesome! =D

Wow...

It's been a while since I saw this page...

*Nods*

The update was rad though. Seriously.

Sorta wanted to punch Brian when he started with his little bitch fit in the weight room though. I mean, what the fuck was he thinkin'? Yelling at a pregnant woman like that...

He should be ashamed.

Very, very ashamed.

Matt should have punched him, or yelled at him and told him to stop being a dick or something. Because yeah... entirely uncalled for. I don't give a shit if he is stressed and/or upset about what happened on that disastrous shopping trip.

And now they're all living on the island... haha. They're all stuck there with a certifiably insane pregnant woman... *giggles* Hope they come out of that situation alive...

Well...

Sorta alive...

But you know what I meant.

Anyways. I loved the update.

Hurry and write another, mmkays?

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dude wanna know what would be even more interesting? nevermind.... but it does involve zacky and nia. haha im gonna shut up but UPDATE!!!!

This story is SO awesome.

Well...

I was right.

Major freak out after the island attack. As expected. Lol. Only not just by Nia. All the women lost it. Not that you can blame them. They had every reason to start screaming.

Woah. Vaeh's pregnant. Hehe. At least she hasn't shown any sign of the rage induced tantrums Nia has. I mean, really, one angry preggo vampire is enough for them to deal with. Two? I think they'd start staking themselves. Lol. And the 'Please just don't throw furniture' thing was epic too.

I loved it.

It was effin' rad, fer seriousness.

I can't wait fer the next one now.

Update it.

Soon.

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Ahh.

It's been a while since I got an update here. It's cool though... because this one was epic.

Seriously.

It was rad. Even without any dialogue. Lol.

These chapters seem to be popping up rather often huh? What is this one, like the third one?

I am glad we got a little background for Matt though. It's good to know about his past. Mostly because I'm nosy and I like to have that sort of information. Hehe.

Hehe. And of course there was no other way to end it than with Nia glaring at Zack and Brian. You don't have to be a mind reader to know what's going through her mind. Something along the lines of 'Yeah... this deserted island was a great idea. Totally safe and all... no one will ever think to look here... wrong!'. Hehe.

You knew that was coming.

Like I said, this update was epic. I loved it.

More.

It be what I want.

In a timely manner would be lovely.

Lol.

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Weeeeeeeee I cannot wait for more this story is totallyyy epic....

and I love Jimmyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Haha.

I loved it.

Seriously. I mean. Absolutely adored it.

That stunt with Nia and Jimmy was fucking epic. Dillon was totally not expecting it and the fact that Jimmy played it off so well was fucking awesome. I just hope that, for his sake, Brian never finds out about it.

Look at what he did to poor Zack and him and Nia weren't even dating when they fucked. Granted... nothing happened between Nia and Jimmy and it wouldn't ever, but I'm pretty positive that Brian wouldn't care.

I can't believe she agreed to go to the island. I mean, really? *shakes head* No matter its probably best when it comes to the safety of everyone involved... buut, that's entirely besides the point.

Wonder how Brian's gonna react when he finds out... *giggles*

I want more... soon.

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Dude.

I loved this chapter.

Fer serious.

That Dillon guy... he's a total fucking creeper. I get what he want's with Nia and all... but that 'She won't cross me' shit. He must not realize who the fuck it is he's dealing with exactly. Otherwise, yeah, he'd fucking know she's more than willing to do anything and everything to deter him. Oh well... his fucking funeral.

Oh... so now there telling Nia about the island.

Haha! It's about time Brian caught some of her abuse. I totally don't blame Zacky for laughing. I would have too. Oh... and now he gets to get back at him for the little display with Nia up against the bus. 'Bout fucking time.

Fucking figures. Brian would ruin that for him, wouldn't he. I love what Laila says to him, about being such a fucking baby. She's right you know. Zacky didn't complain nearly as much.He needs to man up, fer serious.

What the fuck? Why is he being such a dick to Nia? He knows she's prone to throwing things when she gets pissed off. And let's not forget that he thinks its hilarious when the objects aren't being flung in his direction. That's a pretty big double standard there. Besides that, he should fucking know better than to be such a fucking dick to a very hormonal, very pregnant woman. It never ends well.

What the fuck Zack? That's the mother of your children. Shouldn't you be checkin' on her?

*Nods*

Yeah. You should.

Men.

Oh. Now they all come running. When she's had a vision.

Ut oh.

It involves Chrys and Serenity. Great... fuckin' Dillon is after her. That's just fantastic. *shakes head*

Mmkay. I think you know what I'm about to say.

I want a fuckin' update.

Expediently.

New word there... aren't you impressed?

Hehe.

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*Giggles at the opening of chapter*

Seriously. That's probably the most epic first line in this one so far. Thank god for Jimmy and the comic relief that he brings.

*Nods*

Haha. Brian's guarding that cake with his life. That's a little sad, you know. I mean, seriously. It's just a cake. He's got a girlfriend who cooks like no other, its not like he can't give her puppy eyes and have her make him another one. Then again... he's probably afraid of provoking her fits of rage. God knows I would be if I were him.

Or Zack.

Especially Zack.

He tends to be in the line of fire. Poor guy.

Oh that's just awesome. That not gaining weight thing. I wish real life was like that. Eat all the junk food you want and not get fat. That would be a lovely thing. Mmhmm.

Haha. No. No army needed to eat that. Just a bunch of kids. I'm with Chrys on the whole shuddering at mixing blood with milk thing. There is something decidedly depraived about that. It makes sense though. Just kinda gross for anyone who has never had to deal with it I guess.

Haha! Adele had a baby scare. Lucky bitch. She didn't end up with a blood sucking fetus (I bet you thought I was gonna say parasite didn't you?) in her womb. Then again Nia's carrying one for the both of 'em isn't she?

Anyway... I loved this chapter. It was awesome. *Nods*

Can't wait to see where the next one goes.

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Lmao...

Poor Zacky. When's Brian gonna get a head injury? He really is due for one, you know.

And yet again, he's bleeding from the head profusely and no one even seems bothered by it.

I like how the only one to get an apology is Fang... that's the only one she feels guilty for scaring. Okay... so maybe she'd have felt guilty if she'd have scared the baby too... but yeah. Not the case so the dog's the only one she feels bad for.

Hehe. The island bit made me giggle too. But you knew it would because it was my idea, haha.

So the island is gonna be absolutely destroyed with an abundance of baked goods.

Sounds perfectly reasonable to me.

Awww. The cake specifically for Brian was sweet. It really was.

Mmkay. So you know I loved this one. It made me laugh. Fer seriousness.

*nods*

Updates are nice. Just so you know.

Lol.

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Hehe.

I knew it.

I fucking knew that baby was gonna end up with Jimmy and Chrys. I just knew it. She was waay too attached to that kid for it not to happen.

I mean really. If there was a scale from one to ten gauging how shocked I was it would be at like negative 59.

*grins*

It was a good update though. I like how everyone's special powers are slowly surfacing.

But now here I am... wanting yet another update... because really, we all know how I am.

Impatient.

To say the least.

Hehe.

But you love it.

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Hehe.

Cuute. Nia fell asleep in the library. I, being the complete nerd I am, have actually fallen asleep like that many a time. Though never in my own personal library. Pssh. Do I look rich enough to have one of those?

Yeah.

That's what I thought.

Ohh... and now it's time to take the orphaned baby vamps to the camp. Talk about seriously depressing stuff. *nods* That definitely is a sad thing. I'm shocked Nia isn't bawling at the thought what with the crazy pregnant chick hormones she's got running rampant through her body.

God... I can wait to see how her mood swings go... I'm picturing furniture being thrown into walls and shattering, animals cowering, and Brian and Zack investing in a private island for her to live on until the kids are born.

But hey... that's just me.

*grins*

I really am some sort of sadist, aren't I?

But yeah... loved it... I want more. As per usual.

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P.S. That up there doesn't really count as a prediction right? Right.

Mmhmm.

Yeah. Loved this chapter. Definitely did.

Glad Talia isn't really in trouble for that explosion thing. Like she said... she didn't mean for it to get so outta hand.

And what the hell? Brian has another sister? I wasn't expecting that. In fact that was prolly the last thing I was expecting.

What the hell? Why are they expecting the preggo girl to cook for them? Shouldn't they be cooking for her? Yeah. That's what I thought.

Mmkay. Well I'm off to go read IRWIC since you've posted that. Which I'm stoked about. Love yew!

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These two chapters were... well they were epic. I loved them. Really and truly.

Poor Zack... he couldn't luck out and get at least one boy. *shakes head* I almost think you're trying to torture him.

Nia's right though, they're gonna have their hands full with those sneaky little kids. Seriously though. My favorite line from this chapter was the whole bit about needing a little 'supernatural help from those talented twins'. It made me laugh.

Oh and Jimmy calling Nia a freak. 'Cause lets face it... that's totally what he was saying.

I feel bad for Talia though... I mean... its gonna suck having to tell the council that the entire reason for that fiasco was all her fault. Yeah. Totally glad I'm not her.

Anyways... I'm outta here. Gonna go comment TAALS. I'm looking forward to my updates on monday. Hopefully I'll catch you on here then.

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Yay.

I finally got my damn answers! It's about friggin' time too! God woman. Keeping me guessing like that. It's not fair. It really isn't. And poor 'Nia thinkin' everyone's gonna abandon her cause she gets visions. Come on... they're vampires... then again so is she.

Oh awesome! She's immune to silver. *snorts* Good luck killing her now you baddie-vamps. I'd love to see that attempt. Really. It'd be pretty funny if you think about it. Maybe not at the time... but definitely afterwards.

Mmkay. So I'm still caught up on comments :P and I'm outta here.

Updates are very welcome. *grins*

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Firstly. I would like to say, your readers really need to comment you more.

I pretty much own this review page, and I've been seriously lacking in the reviews lately, something which I'm very sorry for.

But yeah. Other readers: COMMENT DAMMIT!

And now that I'm done harassing them. I loved these last two chapters. You know that. Especially the last one. I can't wait to see what everyone's reaction to Nia's 'gift' is. Should be pretty damn interesting.

I don't like that people are trying to off Adele though. that's pretty shitty. And dumb if you ask me. But I've already told you all of this.

Well. I'm outta here. I've got TIG left to comment I think and then I'm caught up. Yay!

Love yew!

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Haha. It was awesome.

Really though, Laila took it better than I thought she would. I Totally expected her to lunge at Zack and try and suffocate him... not that it'd do much since he really doesn't need to breathe. Revetahw.

I was also super amused by the fact that Matt was the one to inform Elainia that she was knocked up. That super-dad spidey sense you threw in was rad. If only it really worked that way... then there'd be no need for all those stupid effin' 'You know you my baby daddy!' shows like Maury. Gah. I frickin' hate those.

Anyway. I can't wait for more. Really I can't wait to see Brian and Zacky's reactions to... well... you know. *smirks* I'm waiting impatiently for my C=T update... and would very much so love it if there was maybe a Dear God and Time is Gone update as well. I haven't read those in a while.

Well I'm off to work on Harder Than You Know, and probably something new as well... I'll talk to you laters.

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Ha!

I loved it. Really I did. And I'm sorry it took me so long to comment on it. But you know, with all that's been going on I really haven't had the time. I'm hoping that all changes soon though.

Poor Zacky... Laila's gonna kill him when she wakes up. It ain't gonna be pretty either.

Anyways. I'm waiting, impatient as ever, for more updates. And in particular, my Forever update. Actually. I'm practically dying for that one. But I'm gonna go now... try and get some shit done.

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