Fifteenth and Lubbock. - Comments

Was a delight to read. :}

Wow.

I don't really know what to say other than you have an incredible imagination. This was interesting, and I totally wasn't expecting him to take her stuff. I like that he took the rug though, makes me wonder if it was at random or if he really needed a rug. XD

And...I'm not sure whether I think that he was a legitimate angel. I kinda do, and that maybe this was some kind of karma thing because Gale seemed pretty sure about it. But then again, I think it could go the other way too. The characters were really distinct and I loved that. I love characters with big personalities. And I like how it was just so normal- the dialogue between them flowed really naturally, and I really enjoyed reading it.

One Shot for One Shot

this is really good! With the theories of God and her disbelieving in the angel made me happy to no content. But, it made me kinda sad that he took her things. I wonder why, and that's what I love. When people put me in a cliffy, I get so happy to figure out the mystery of things.

Very great job. =]

Once again, I love the photo. He kind of reminds me of Angel in the third X-Men move. :cute:

This was a really unique oneshot. I definitely wasn't expecting Adam to have sex with Gale or steal her stuff, but I guess it was a good way to teach her a lesson. I love how he didn't just steal her wallet, he stole her television, rug and such as well. That made me giggle. :XD

I think I know why all her things were stolen in the end... or
1.) He wasn't really an angel and he was just looking for the stash... (Prob. not)
or (My fav.)
2.) To teach her a lesson, he stole her wallet in a way of saying "Win your money with dignity." her cocaine "Move on." Her... Television, radio and rug "You don't need this."

Well those are my hypothesis. Though, I could be wrong and it's non of the above... The mystery kills me :crazy:

Ahh! I loved that!
It was perfect.

One Shot For One Shot

I love the blunt beginning :XD

And I really liked the rest of the story tpp :tehe: It's a original thought, and the conversations between Gale and Adam just flow so well.

I like the description of what she's wearing, it's not too much, but gives a pretty good inside of what type of person she might be. Though I hate to see the word 'vagina' in stories, so that made me twitch a little :XD

And oh, the ending. Adam is a very clever guy, though because of what it was about, I can't help but to think that Adam really was sent by the 'big guy', and that this is a somewhat revenge for all the bad stuff she've done :think:
Never trust an angel :lmfao

Oneshot for oneshot.

:lmfao
I love the ending, it's completely priceless.
I really wasn't expecting that because Adam definitely seemed like a real angel, he was such a sweetheart.
She should have examined how his wings were attached to his back. :tehe:

I really liked it. ^___^

:lmfao
I loved this, it was amazing and beautiful and perfect and sort of funny.
I don't know where you get these ideas from.
Don't go fucking angels, kthnxbai.
:XD
Love you Erin. this made my day.
:arms:

I'm surprised no one commented this :cheese:.
I really, really enjoyed this :cute:.
I love your straightforwardness in third person.
I loved all of it except for the last few paragraph [the last two?] But I loved the part when she walked into the living room and everything had been stolen.
But I'm confused by that part.
Did the "angel" steal from her?
Anywho, I love your writing.