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  • malkin.

    malkin. (105)

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    Oooh, do I really get the first comment? Neat. Anywayyy.
    Since I'm kinda bored now, since noone is online, and since I had too little sleep, the second I get offline, I get to zombie mode, therefore I have to be online, therefore I'm going to comment. And if this sentence made sense, I'd be very surprised. :XD

    I like this a lot! You often use this ~concept, where Kitten doesn't like something about Andy, but still stays with him because he loves him, and I really like that thingy. I like how Kitten is often written as sex addict *cough* (I so don't write him like that :coffee: ), and here sexis the part he doesn't like suddenly. It makes me wonder what happened that it changed, because you said it in one of my favourite parts: They used to be close like this before, with bodies moving perfect together, low moans coming from both as they kissed, sending the boy to blissful existence. Now it's cold, he's trying to fight away, there's no love left in the movements.. What could have happened that such a change occured?

    Anyways, I do like it a lot! <3
    August 3rd, 2009 at 12:15pm