Flesh And Sin. - Comments

I liked how it was from a guys perspective. Normally, it's a girl who thinks things through like that. And, I liked how you brought that out in your character. Also, it was just so cute the way you described everything about your characters lover. Your use of description honestly blows me out of the water. I felt like I knew this man personally, like I have done every possible thing with him and I know everything about him. It's incredible to get that feeling, and is my favorite thing about amazing authors like yourself.
The whole innocent sin (. . . kinda) vibe was great. Hey, sin isn't always a bad thing and you portrayed that in your entry very well. You had me totally convinced that sin was good.
Good luck in the future!

I am so sorry for the wait and lacking comment! I was going to do this great review on the entries, but it came out slightly hard to do with creations under 300 words. I hope this was good enough for you! :shifty:

I really adore the story. I like how you have, sort of, divided the story in few things and you more from how he's pretty overally to how he's prettier to Andreas' eyes when they have sex; then you move to how his body is amazing, but it is even better when he's all ready for Andreas; then there is the whole obsessed with himself part, and then the highlight, of sorts, when Eric moans Andreas' name (I love how you finished the story with "Andreas..."). I like how you managwed to put so many things in such a short story, something that I never manage in this way, and you do it and it's so natural.

My favourite parts: It's something special, really, when I fuck him. Something different, something totally unique. There's something about the way he writhes and moans and simply begs for it that makes it so... indescribable.

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Everything about him is... sin. It's like pure, unadulterated, uncensored sin. Tempting, exhilarating, tormenting... pure sin.

Good job!

I literally squealed when seeing that you had posted new story :tehe:

I really loved this It's sweet the way Andreas thinks on Cat, and how he sees Cat as most beautiful when he's naked in front of him

He's pretty when he's talking, but he's beautiful when he's too lost in ecstasy to form a coherent sentence.
This was a great start, and it made me sure over that it was from Andreas point of view immediately :XD And I can clearly imagine it too which is :yah

Even when he was seventeen, and - technically - it was illegal, it didn't matter.
-squeals at hint for jailbait!Kitten-
...yes I am sick :XD But it brings more to the story by showing that Andreas never really cared about him being underaged, that it's illegal, 'cause Kitten is everything that matters :arms:

I loved it
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