He's a Prince and I'm the Avatar's Sister - Comments

  • xFreak_Of_Naturex

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    Sorry I've been busy and I'm working on it right now. I'm trying to get it out as quick as possible.
    December 20th, 2011 at 08:50pm
  • skaterdee

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    dude when are u going to up date
    November 30th, 2011 at 01:22pm
  • Slythrian Ballerina

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    Awsome chapter ten was real :)can't wait till chapter 11
    May 14th, 2011 at 10:18pm
  • xFreak_Of_Naturex

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    i will
    November 21st, 2010 at 08:07am
  • H.L.A

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    update plz???!!!
    November 15th, 2010 at 12:31am
  • xFreak_Of_Naturex

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    hahaha okay thanks. and don't sweat about it. Since you guys have commented. I'll comment on your profile when the next chapter is out. In a way.......idk that's all i got.
    October 6th, 2010 at 04:04am
  • This Is Pointless

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    Hey, sorry I haven't read this/commented in so long! I'm gonna catch up as soon as I can! I've just been extremely busy and, admittedly, forgetful. Please forgive me.

    You'll probably be hearing from me soon--and I can't wait to read your transition into the dialogue I suggested. Don't give up on me!!

    -TIP
    September 23rd, 2010 at 05:22am
  • xFreak_Of_Naturex

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    i'm working on the next chapter right now. I'll have it done soon.
    August 10th, 2010 at 06:49am
  • Teddi Manni

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    o.0 no update?????? But it was soooooo gooood please! update pretty please -puppy dog face- I loved it this is the best!
    August 7th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • Slythrian Ballerina

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    This is like my fave zuko story so im hoping for an udate any day now
    August 5th, 2010 at 02:53pm
  • xFreak_Of_Naturex

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    i'll write more. Don't worry. I'm planning on making a sequal as well. Who knows this maybe a trilogy if i can get an idea on what to write about.
    July 16th, 2010 at 08:53am
  • Slythrian Ballerina

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    I love the story so much........and i love how you added in uncle ihro..............pLEASE WRITE MORE...............prretyyy please
    July 15th, 2010 at 07:37am
  • xFreak_Of_Naturex

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    thanks. letting me know people like it makes me want 2 keep writing it
    June 23rd, 2010 at 10:18pm
  • ANimeALert911

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    Epic story. I don't think I blinked once while I was reading it. lol. I was glad you transitioned to separating dialog. after that it was much easier to read. keep it going! :)
    June 22nd, 2010 at 08:03pm
  • xFreak_Of_Naturex

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    yeah i keep forgetting to separate the dialogue and make less cramped. I'm still working on it though. So yeah.
    March 27th, 2010 at 11:58pm
  • This Is Pointless

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    BTW, I'm a total Zuko fan too.
    November 2nd, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • This Is Pointless

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    Come on! Write more! This is pretty good so far. Just watch for grammar and check your dialogue. For instance:

    "Hello," said so-and-so. "How are you today?"

    "Not bad," replied so-and-su.

    Get it? It's kind of hard to read all that dialogue cramped together. But I'm sure you can figure it out
    November 2nd, 2009 at 10:54pm