hahaha okay thanks. and don't sweat about it. Since you guys have commented. I'll comment on your profile when the next chapter is out. In a way.......idk that's all i got.
Hey, sorry I haven't read this/commented in so long! I'm gonna catch up as soon as I can! I've just been extremely busy and, admittedly, forgetful. Please forgive me.
You'll probably be hearing from me soon--and I can't wait to read your transition into the dialogue I suggested. Don't give up on me!!
Epic story. I don't think I blinked once while I was reading it. lol. I was glad you transitioned to separating dialog. after that it was much easier to read. keep it going! :)