That Should Be Me - Comments

  • blasttyrant

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    And for the third time.... Sorry, but I'm just gonna copy and paste. This is really great! You're a really good writer! Not many people use enough detail or correct grammar... But you do both!! Which makes this super easy to read. I really like how your characters have developed. But under the circumstances, I kinda think D is a bitch and doesn,t deserve Nick..
    June 8th, 2012 at 03:28am
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    Comment swap gaveme your story again... So I guess I'll just reitterate what I said before... Your eye for detail and correct grammar and spelling make this a super easy read, which I like.
    June 7th, 2012 at 02:33pm
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    This is really great! You're a really good writer! Not many people use enough detail or correct grammar... But you do both!! Which makes this super easy to read. I really like how your characters have developed. But under the circumstances, I kinda think D is a bitch and doesn,t deserve Nick..
    June 6th, 2012 at 02:01pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I gotta say that I love this story so much! I love how you write it, and that you are writing details, though it's not THAT detailed you do it and that's what I love when I read stories. And then I by the think that the story in it self are really cute/sad and so on. Please update soon again :)
    June 5th, 2012 at 10:46pm
  • ChaceCrawfordFan25

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    please write more
    June 4th, 2012 at 07:58pm
  • anne-stessy

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    love it update soon
    November 6th, 2011 at 03:05pm
  • unbroken13

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    Whoa
    November 6th, 2011 at 05:06am
  • anne-stessy

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    i love your story but i think nick should tell her how much of a bitch she is that's all her fault what kind of girlfriend want her boyfriend to give up a year of their future when he can come visit and what she did with ricky he was right im on his side she was the one who pushed nick away ricky should've killed her than joe who the hell marries the brother of the love of your life if i was nick i would tell her that at the marriage and go find a good person another thing they're always having sex everitime theres finally a date between their sex they end up sexing wth
    aniway love ur story lol i know got too much into it
    October 22nd, 2011 at 08:15pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    awww i love it update soon!!!!!!!!!
    September 20th, 2010 at 04:28am
  • unbroken13

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    WTH
    September 20th, 2010 at 03:09am
  • PrettyReckless;

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    cant wait to read more...(:
    September 7th, 2010 at 05:46am
  • choirgirlx3

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    Love it...update more.... ;)
    August 24th, 2010 at 06:20am
  • choirgirlx3

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    Keep it up, I love the story.
    July 20th, 2010 at 01:19am
  • choirgirlx3

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    Nice update! Can't wait for more. :)
    June 29th, 2010 at 10:55pm
  • Lip Gloss Chaos

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    I don't really understand what's going on here.
    June 29th, 2010 at 05:42am
  • musicmustrock

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    i love the story update
    June 24th, 2010 at 01:41pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    amazing update!
    cant wait for more
    June 19th, 2010 at 08:16pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    wow thaey can't stay away can they?
    loved it write more soon?
    June 9th, 2010 at 09:29pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    Your story is awesome! Update soon!
    June 5th, 2010 at 06:12pm
  • PrettyReckless;

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    Insane......update soon please
    June 4th, 2010 at 11:38pm