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  • Gypsy Rose

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    yes another sequal!! it's awesome that it starts off with them already married, i totally thought this one would be about billie trying to get adrianne back again, kinda back at square one.
    August 10th, 2009 at 12:01am
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

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    ahhhh. yay:)
    I loved the first chapter. It was all cute and homey. And adorable:) It made me wanna hug something cute and fuzzy...:D And I, like everyone else, can NOT wait until the next chapter. I will be co pulsivly checking to see if it's up:) yaaaaaaaaaay!
    August 9th, 2009 at 05:24pm
  • Kyra

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    Wow, this song with this chapter...awesome! I loved the dialogue, and I just loved the general welcoming feeling. It's a gret introduction to Fragmented; you're definitely good at sucking us all in. You're an amazing storyteller. x3

    YAY! NEW STORY! Damn girl, you update fast! I love you!
    August 9th, 2009 at 11:49am
  • effingxcreep

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    I love the story already, this was a fantastic chapter! I am curious to see what repressed memories Adrienne gets back, if any. Can't wait for the next chapter!
    August 8th, 2009 at 02:52am
  • Legomannj

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    Yay, sequel =D
    I love your writing=)
    August 8th, 2009 at 12:13am
  • shakethesky

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    ohh! Im pretty sure the whole memory loss has to do with that guy from High school, the one that got arrested!!!!
    I loved the first chapter. Please dont make billie lose his balls. poor billie :)
    August 7th, 2009 at 02:48pm
  • Hippieantarchist

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    I like it already :D
    August 7th, 2009 at 01:26pm
  • Caznesss

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    I am very very excited to see where this leads. This chapter was very cute :)

    *subscribes*
    August 7th, 2009 at 09:03am
  • effingxcreep

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    Hey, first comment. :]

    I am really looking forward to the first chapter! :D
    August 7th, 2009 at 06:04am