Fragmented. - Comments

YesyesyesyesYES.
I'm so excited for Christian to know he's the missing child.
The poor kid might shut a brick, but at least I'll know for certain that Christian and Gloria aren't brother and sister. Even though I'm fairly certain they're not.

And Billie's seriously the most adorable thing when he's sex deprived (:
More soooonn pleeeeeeease(:

D'awww that was adorable. <3

And woo, quick update! :D

Awwwwwww. (:
This made my heart ridiculously warm.
And I'm glad Billie made it in time. That would of been awful.
Now I just need to know about the missing child and my
life will be complete.

And Judith Olivia sounds sooooooo pretty! (:

I love the New Year's update! Keep it up :D

Judith Olivia Armstrong.
I. LOVE!!!!!!!!

Ahaha!!!
"Little Judy"

Teehehehe!!!

This story gets better and better!!!! You are an amazing writer :D

Hell fucking yess.
Christian is SO the missing child.
Maybe that will tame Adrienne when Billie gets home..
'Cause Billie's in deep shit right now.
Go, Billie, go, go, go!

CHRISTIAN IS THEIR MISSING CHILD!!!
I CAN FEEL ITTTT!!!!
...Sorry, I got a little excited :)

Oh, no. Billie better do something quick before Adrienne murders him...

oh yay a baby!
hmm. . . bad feeling bout Christian tho

I love this story. I never want it to end. Christian <3

I love this story. I never want it to end. Christian <3

I'm hooked <3

"Okay, hun, I won't," she said sincerely. "But if I'm writhing in pain and screaming my head off and you're nowhere to be found, I'll never forgive you," she said casually.

There was a long pause. He was trying to process what she just said.

"...Are you serious?"

HAHA!! Loved that!
Oh, Christian...tsk tsk.
I have a baaad feeling about this...he's not going to stick around for long, is he?..

I love Christian. AHHHH, love reading this story.

yay I love Tre haha
I do get confused a little with C&G. Are they related or did they just feel as close as brother and sister for a while?
anywho, love this and can't wait for the next update :)

CHRISTIAN IS BACK!!!!
YAY!

:DDDD

Amazing new chapter :D I love the way you write!!! Amazing!!!

hahahaha mistook it for foreplay....

anyways keep updating :)

Teehehehe! xD