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  • PaigeyPantsFTW

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    Awww. (: That was just precious! :D
    Billie's so adorable when he's drunk. Haha.
    I really wish he didn't have to go away. Bad things always seem to happen when he has to go away. :(
    Update sooooon (:
    December 12th, 2010 at 01:20am
  • GDandMe

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    Your story is just AMAZING!!!!! I love it!!!!
    November 29th, 2010 at 09:44pm
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

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    Your authors note made me sad with jealousy. Kay?
    Awwwh, Adie's so cute.
    Getting all worked up like that..
    and Billie's just so understanding and sweet. :3
    November 23rd, 2010 at 03:58am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Green Day LIVE for FREE?!
    How?!
    You must message me about this, ASAP! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

    Anyway, that was just too cute <3
    November 22nd, 2010 at 10:28pm
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Awww (:
    He is so adorable sometimes :D
    November 20th, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

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    (: that was so cuute.
    I wonder what Billie's got planned?
    I have a hunch...but I think I'll just wait and see what you've got in store for us. :)
    November 20th, 2010 at 04:54am
  • R!oT_GrRrL

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    Over 200 comments!
    Thank you all! =D
    November 12th, 2010 at 08:39am
  • Kiss Me Deadly.

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    haahaha "...Impure thoughts?" I love that :P keep updating :D
    November 12th, 2010 at 01:10am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    AHAHAHA! I can't believe Gloria just said that! I nearly fell out of my chair because I was giggling so much!

    So glad you finally updated! (:
    November 10th, 2010 at 11:27pm
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

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    Aw. (: that was just too cute.
    I like how relaxed everything was at the end.
    More soon?
    November 10th, 2010 at 04:43pm
  • Kyra

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    I love the dialogue in the last chapter! XD
    November 2nd, 2010 at 03:15am
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

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    Awh. :)
    even though Billie was still mad, he was still sad they were gone.
    I like it so much better when they're not angry with each other.
    And Adie is just adorable. :)

    D: Good luck on your midterms! I hope you do amazing. :)
    October 27th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    At least she wasn't going to be known as the weird kid who thinks their dad is cute.

    BAHAHAHA!!!
    October 27th, 2010 at 02:37am
  • Lillygreen

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    Great work. I loved this part pretty much.
    And it´s written in a really real way how billie talks to adie.
    And I love how Gloria speaks to him.

    Could you make Billie care about Jake when he has this flu thing? Would be funny.
    October 26th, 2010 at 10:38pm
  • sammieleann

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    I'm sooooo excited for another chapter. I read the first two stories in the same day. You're an amazing writer, and this is, by far, one of the best fanfics I've ever read:)
    October 26th, 2010 at 06:45am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Update!!
    Please?
    I'm so excited!
    October 25th, 2010 at 04:22am
  • AngelFake

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    WAH?!?!?!
    oh wait, tis Christian, in'it?
    October 21st, 2010 at 09:20pm
  • Lillygreen

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    This story is great.
    But I´m a really bad surprised that Gloria isn´t Billies/Adies and that they don´t care anymore about her.
    Maybe they could adopt her or despite treat her like a daughter.
    This plus are right that they have to healthy boys but it would be cool if they could treat her like her daughter.
    I love this fanfic. It´s written in a very good way. Please go on as fast as you can. I enjoy it.
    October 19th, 2010 at 07:16pm
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

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    ...It has to be Christian then. Right?
    Or some other kid is gonna pop up out of nowhere... hahaha.
    and fuck. :( Fighting is BAD. I want them to be happy and love each other all the time. D:
    October 19th, 2010 at 05:12am
  • ashleyziur

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    ahhhHH!! the fighting adds a little "umph" to it. loved it!!!! :)
    October 18th, 2010 at 04:14am