We'll Feel So Alive - Comments

  • Jilliebob

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    Oh my God! I just started reading this entire story a couple days ago and I couldn't stop!! It was amazing and I was so sad it had to end. You're a truly fantastic writer and I would definately read more of your work!!!
    July 12th, 2011 at 04:55pm
  • Multi Colored Ranger

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    Oh, and I really, really want to know what the heck happened to Taylor! :O
    April 20th, 2010 at 01:05am
  • Multi Colored Ranger

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    So, hey. :) I absoluely loved every part of this story. I love TJ. And I'm so happy that they're back together in the end. I would have cried if they weren't. Haha. Ahh, I'm so sad that it's over. I loved it soo much. It was fantastic. You're a great writer.
    April 17th, 2010 at 06:20pm
  • we.are.golden

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    I WANT A RYAN DUNCAN ONE!!! Oh gosh this story was GREAT :D and I always wanted her to choose Ryan haha, so PLEEAASSEEE do a Ryan one. Butttt... I also really want you to do the Taylor point of view :/ Can you do both? heh. But if I had to vote on just one, I would vote for the Ryan one. Dude.... You like rock at writing. So whichever you do its gonna be great :)
    February 10th, 2010 at 04:31pm
  • laceybebe

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    alyssa!!!
    gawwwd. i dont even know where to start on this one.

    you have no idea how much i have loved this story and how sad i am that its over.
    i found they'll think its just cause were young when you had almost finished it and i read it in one day because i couldnt stop. thats the first story of yours that i read on here and because of it i just had to read all of your others. its was just so amazing and i didnt think the sequel could get much better than it, but obvi it did. youre an amazing writer, and it was deffinitely one of my faves. you made characters that i really felt for and it takes talent to do that.

    i am thrilled that tj finally came to realize how special breanne was to him. took him long enough, but he did and thats all that matters.

    this chapter was a perfect ending.
    the whole time that bre was reminising about all of the boys i was teary eyed...not gonna lie. i really didnt think that you were going to give us a happy ending, but them bam! you did and i got a little giddy. so thank you for that =]

    im going to miss this story so much!!! but i think that you should do the whole ry duncs twist. obvi i would read baby osh's pov and i have no doubt that it would be fantastic, but i kind of want some ryan duncan.

    great job on this whole story....i loved it.
    its as simple as that.
    <3
    February 8th, 2010 at 08:33pm
  • srhls.

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    i feel like a part of me just died... this story has had a special place in my heart since the beginning! i can't believe it's over.

    the whole time i had no idea how you were going to end it. would she somehow end up with tj? would you pull a twist have haver her end up with someone else? would she even end up with anyone?!? gah, it was stressful, no lie.

    i just remembered how bre and zach had a thing in the very very very beginning. ohhh lord, good times hahaha

    well... i'm going to miss this story dearly. tj and bre have this kind of relationship that every girls wants. the fights, the cheating, the fun, and love. everything it exactly how a relationship with a guy like tj probably is. i just don't know what else to say.
    February 8th, 2010 at 07:11pm
  • limmy95

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    awesome story! can't believe it is over... i wanna read a taylor oshie pov on why he left breanne. but a ryan duncan ending sounds pretty good too..great job btw. hope to see more.
    February 8th, 2010 at 02:29pm
  • MissLis

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    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    this story and the last chapter especially have been an EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER!
    and I loved every second of it! :D:D:D:D:D:D

    jeeze, took Osh a fuckin' long time to realize all that! but, phew, he did in the end, so it's all good.
    and Brad... *swoons* too bad he's not in NoDak anymore *pouts* who would mind a baby with him?! (no one, that's who, least me hehe)

    I'd like to know why Taylor just left and I'd also think it'd be interesting to see what would've happened if she chose Ryan instead, since he's in Salzburg now and all hehe
    and Salzburgh, by the way, is EXTREMELY much closer to where I live than NoDak *grins* maybe they play somewhere close here soon? *swoons* that'd be dope!
    February 8th, 2010 at 08:48am
  • afia7x

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    This was an amazing story! I can't believe it is over :( If you decide to somehow continue on with this story you should somehow let everybody know.... well or at least me haha.

    T.J. Oshie is amazing!

    You are an amazing writer! I think this is the best story that I have read since a Brian Haner Jr. story I have read on here.
    February 8th, 2010 at 06:56am
  • rockstaar.

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    Alyssa.....
    I am heartbroken.
    I can't believe this is over.
    It was so good, so so good. And I loved the way that you ended it and tied everything together, and I just want to cry right now. They were so cute, and so perfect, and kdalfkdlj. Everything just worked out perfectly.
    I'm going to miss this story so much, but I'm so proud of you for sticking it out and writing such an amazing two stories.
    And as for what's next.... obviously, I would love whichever you choose. Baby Osh could be an interesting one, but then again a Duncs twist could be cool. Whichever you do, I know it will be faabulousss (:
    I can't believe this is my last comment on this. I'm so upset right now. But this was just amazing, and you know how much I loved it.
    I love this story, I love you, I love TJ fucking Oshie <33
    February 8th, 2010 at 06:02am
  • MollyRhiannan

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    WAIT. one more thing.

    “Breanne, you need to stay away from TJ Oshie at all costs, do you hear me?”
    gahhh i love it :)
    February 8th, 2010 at 05:52am
  • MollyRhiannan

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    i'm a retard. i completely mean a Taylor POV.
    hah.
    fail.
    February 8th, 2010 at 05:49am
  • MollyRhiannan

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    tears. SOO many tears streaming down my cheeks right now.
    first, i was pissed that she had to go through this alone.
    then sad. you are honestly SUCH a good writer, you made this emotion come out in me. i literally was crying with her when she was driving up to brad's house.
    then whenever TJ was there. oh man curveball.
    and OHHSHIT. his little love shpeal.. (sp?) was SOOO fucking adorable, i was crying becuase 1-why can't i have a man as perfect as him in the end, and 2-he finally fucking realized. seriously. perfect ending.
    and then i stopped crying, because brad said the thing about his kid's name was a tribute to osh :]
    still gotta have that humor in there. haha

    oh my my my. i'm so sad this is over. your baby's gone =/

    here's what i want. an epilogue in TJ's POV, up through the end, and like what made him realize she was the one.
    not a ryan story. well sure, but not connected to this :]
    your ending is just too perfect to change.

    so here we go. i hated this story at times. i hated YOU at times for not writing it how i wanted:] and most of all, i freaking loved it.
    best writer ever. YOU.

    the end.
    =]
    February 8th, 2010 at 05:47am
  • light.the.lamp

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    ahhhhh I loved this story so much!! I can't believe it's over! but it would be awesome if you wrote it from Taylor's view!!
    February 8th, 2010 at 05:24am
  • xashleyx10126

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    I'm sad that this story is over! But I have to say that I do love the way that you ended it. Tj and bre should always be together. You should do the new piece on Taylor I always wonder in the back of my mind when I read this what happened to him. I sort of assumed that he was falling for her and had to cut himself out of her life, but idk. A chapter from his POV would be amazing! Again I loved this story and thank you for writing it. I'm sad it's over.

    Ashley<3
    February 8th, 2010 at 05:06am
  • c is for carly.

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    oh goodness!
    i seriously started tearing up at the end of this.
    i can't believe it's actually over!
    but i'm super super happy that breanne and tj are together again.
    and that lynette told brad about his child and that they're back together.
    i love these sort of endings <3
    and i would love to know taylor has to say,
    because he left and just never came back.
    February 8th, 2010 at 04:47am
  • Aliannah_Rocks

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    Loved the ending! I was really nervous that you were not going to have her and TJ end up together...
    And I'm glad that Brad was a good Daddy!
    Sad that it's over Aly :(
    Hopefully you'll write why Taylor left, because I never understood that part :/
    Hopefully you write an Epilogue! Can't wait to see what you write next!
    February 8th, 2010 at 03:17am
  • Rylie_

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    I can't believe it's over. I really can't. This story is what made me start following TJ. I enjoyed all the ups and downs that you wrote in. I can't wait to see what you do next.
    February 8th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • dyana.22

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    <3 <3 <3 <3
    i loved the ending/ the story in general :)
    February 8th, 2010 at 03:03am
  • urbanfan4ever

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    Love it, love it, LOVE IT!!

    Don't continue on. It's perfect. Allthough, a little Taylor closure would be nice.
    February 8th, 2010 at 02:32am