i just finished reading this story and i must say that it was simply amazing good job Miranda! you are one amazing writer..dont ever give up on writing no matter whaqt anyone says
i just finished reading this story and i must say that it was simply amazing good job Miranda! you are one amazing writer..dont ever give up on writing no matter whaqt anyone says
I loved the story i couldnt stop reading it. After the had sex i was like “shes gonna get prego.” and i was pissed when he said he couldnt do it ! i just wish i was her i would of knock some sence into him. but i was so happy and the ending made my heart melt! but he needs to be less protective! LOVED IT!
well, after a lengthy absence, I've returned to find this story finished. a bit disheartening, but I do like how it ended. it had a nice run, and came so far, and I loved every minute of it—even if you left us with more cliffhangers than any author should, my poor little heart. you can guarantee that once I've finished catching up on all the other stories I left behind (and there are many), your tie it with a ribbon will be one of the first I start. :) also, if you're still offering the word doc for this story, I'd love a copy—I can add it to all my other fave ebooks. ;)
So... I know this ended. But I was really bored right? So I decided to re-read every single chapter :P Anyway. I've noticed that Gracie really likes passing out. Like...she passes out so many times...it doesn't seem humanly possible. But I still love your story (:
i think you should get this edited (or reread by somebody so they can edit it in case of mistakes) and get this published! 8D it's awesome, and I love it a lot. may i also have a word document? if it's alright with you i'll send you my email via message! and i like option #2! 8D
i loved this story so much, you're a great author, good luck with any more works of art! 8D
OMG! Forreals?!?! It's the end already?! D:< Anddd yes yes yes I would love a document of this. ^_^ technicolorxtiaras@yahoo.com :DDDD -excited all over again- buttt awwww, there's not gonna be a sequel! :L Oh well. -crestfallen- I will always love this story. <3 AND!: Hmm. Option 2. That kind of reminds me of the story Hawksong. x] Soooo of course I'm going to have to go with that! (LOL, Hawksong is one of my favorite books.) ^_^ Okay i'm finished withh this amazingly long comment. :3
(Whoops! I wasn't finished D:) I'm gonna miss Dray, Gracie, Marc, Johnny, Marty, Kai, Marcy, Robbie, Dante, Cameron, and Drakken soooo much! :( I'm even going to miss the two little new additions to the family :'( Gracie used to hate Dray because he was so horrid to her. But the love between them (that was ever so wobbly and unsteady on its feet) slowly blossomed. It was like that house of cards! It fell down several times for different reasons but it is now fully built and stable ^_^ you are such a magnificent writer darlin! Tell Gideon that we love him!!! I believe both plots are very potential! And both could be wonderful stories so I say BOTH!!! :) Well.. So long for now D': *hugs hugs* you are one of the most down to earth authors gurl and I love ya! (even though I don't know you xD) I'm going to miss this story terribly. I don't want to let go!!! :( goodbye -Kaylers I <3 Trembling With The Strings!!!
I can't believe it's over!!! :'( I will miss this story so much! I can't believe I'm so emotionally attached to this story! It's like they are my family!!! D: An you can bet that I want it! I will PM you my email, kay?
I don't comment much...in fact I don't think I've ever commented you lol. But I have been a faithful subscriber :) and i say option two. But I'm slightly sad this one is over :(
I can't believe it's over :'( Anyways, I like option two. And despite it being over and making me really sad, it's a very good story- And definetly has a chance to get published!
lolz that description is my family!! lolz if I read it right, it's, from youngest to oldest, brother, brother, herself, sister, brother. haha that's my family ;p im the middle. I think i might read this lol