I literly burst out laughing in chapter 61, when Demetrius came threw the door and put his ear to her belly! XD " BABY" XD, He's so CUTE!!!
Sorry, but Darius is a fudging dick head... HOW DARE HE WANT HER TO GET AN ABORTION!!! It was his fudging sperm, HA! He has no wright to yell at her. He has screwed himself up for once.
i like the chapter! 8D good luck with the chinchilla by the way... sounds cute! and now i'm sad that the next chapter... is the last! D'8 but you worked hard! can't wait until the next story! 8D
You wrote an amazing chapter (as always)... But I can't believe it's almost over!!! I might cry D: That would be bad. But it still upsets me... Congrats on your new chinchilla! :D I'm happy yo got him!
OMFG!! I freaking loved that last update.. I was in such a bad mood when I got home.. and then I just got extremely cheery when I saw that my subscription was updated and... when I read the story I was absolutely amazed. You are such an amaaazing writer, and I wanna thank you for being the source of my happiness so often. xD
THERE ARE TWO!?! :D *gets up and dances around the room with Dray, Gracie, and Kai!* Yayzers!!! You know.. This chapter shows that yes, Kai can be evil, but he is still a kid, and he can be loveable. Keep up the great work!!!!!!!
*screams and then runs to hug you!* we missed you!!!
It's always agitating when an adult figure shoots you down and says you can't do this or that :( I hope you get your chinchilla though! :D then you can show that you can and will take care of em! (Chinchillas are so cute!)
But on the story... Those two chapters were epic. Kai is a manipulative lil bugger. It's amazing, the power he has. Dray... he went crazy! And then collapsed!!!!! I'm surprised he didn't figure out sooner!
I wonder what all this will lead to... Well, update soon gurl! And good luck with your chinchilla!
i love this story so much and i don't want it to end! but it has to... and there won't be a sequel so that's pretty sad too! i think drakken told dray something other than gracie having a baby... i'm not sure though! it's like kai planned on having her tell him that day! OMG! i love it! 8D
Sorry, but Darius is a fudging dick head... HOW DARE HE WANT HER TO GET AN ABORTION!!! It was his fudging sperm, HA! He has no wright to yell at her. He has screwed himself up for once.