Trembling With the Strings - Comments

ooohhh
this outta be interesting
please keep going
lol

Mello.
Love the story. I've written a quick ending; heres the outline.

Darius admits his undying love for Marcus,
Gracie and Dante elope to Africa,
Bryce dies by fright, by looking in a mirror,
And then they all disappear in a puff of purple smoke.

Oh yeah,
Marcy drinks the blood of an ADHD & ADD child that had had sugar in the past two hours and dies of sugar poisoning.

love, carrots

AMAZING!

I'm so curious as to what will happen between Bryce and Gracie, now.
Hmm... things are surely spicing up!

wow
that was deep
and uber amazing
keep going

iFRENCHFRyy.:

Well, I'm a new reader! Tee hee.

This is a very good story! (: I nearly cried my eyes out with what Darius did to Marc! Ugh, that bastard! If only I can kick him where the sun don't shine... if only. ::Ranting:

I can't wait for the next chapter! And sometimes, I feel as if I'm Gracie because I'm practically imagining myself in her POV, haha. :tehe:

Keep up the good work!

then I suppose I'm doing my job :) thanks guys you are such amazing people and I'm not just sucking up here :D

Well, I'm a new reader! Tee hee.

This is a very good story! (: I nearly cried my eyes out with what Darius did to Marc! Ugh, that bastard! If only I can kick him where the sun don't shine... if only. ::Ranting:

I can't wait for the next chapter! And sometimes, I feel as if I'm Gracie because I'm practically imagining myself in her POV, haha. :tehe:

Keep up the good work!

omg
love it to death
the 44th chapter was blocked
but its no bd

I didn't expect THAT to happen. Like Wow!

Gosh I don't have Internet for a few days and miss so much! xD Well...Darius is a jerk. lol

eleni.the.great:

As always, you cease to suprise me! I loved the updates, and cannot wait for more. I hope I don't frighten you when I say this, but "IF YOU EVER STOP WRITING THIS I WILL COME TO YOUR HOUSE, TIE YOU TO A CHAIR IN YOUR BEDROOM AND FORCE YOUR FINGERS TO MOVE ACROSS THE KEYBOARD!" Well, until the next update. :)

These are the kind of things that make writing worth while... and make you deadbolt your door :shock: Oh, and almost 50 subscribers already! Thanks guys :mrgreen:

I really like your story I can't wait 2 read the next chapter

As always, you cease to suprise me! I loved the updates, and cannot wait for more. I hope I don't frighten you when I say this, but "IF YOU EVER STOP WRITING THIS I WILL COME TO YOUR HOUSE, TIE YOU TO A CHAIR IN YOUR BEDROOM AND FORCE YOUR FINGERS TO MOVE ACROSS THE KEYBOARD!" Well, until the next update. :)

NO BRYCE STAY AWAY!!! Ah!!!!! NOOOO!!! Darius will kill you dracula style!!! Haha whatver tht is!! I LOVED THE TWO CHAPTERS!!! OOMGGGG BRYCEEEE is he evalllle? Can u have someone in your story say 'mwahahah' its my FAVORITE line :)!!!!! Loved!!! ITTTT!!! Cant wait for more! Pretty please or I'll send my fllying monkeys after you haha jk :) but rlly it was AWESOME!

OMG ur story is soooooo awesome. I do have to say itd be funny if someone randomly broke out into dance hahah! Srry but I LOVE ur story and the direction its heading in, I cant wait for more!!!! ITS AWESOME!!!!!

hmmph i may be evil or something because i would have enjoyed Yvette getting in trouble . Grr i hate her now lolz

love it!!!!!!
keep writing

NNNNNOOOOOOOO
i hate cliffhangers
you better update soon or i might go crazy
lol

I probably comment too much. lol It'd really suck if he told her he's secretly gay or something.

:( cliffhanger! no!!!!!

im seriously in love with you (no homo) but seriously love the story. it's amazing. have fun in town! i was going to go into town but no one's home at my place and i wasted my money on clothes at the mall. so i couldn;t.