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  • xxxchicaxxx

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    gurl your amazing! Haha not many people would admit to probably drooling in a book store with their prized possession once published!!! and thats why you have so many dedicated subscribers!!!

    The story is almost over!?! *stutters, gasps, shrieks* NOOOOO!!! :'( I think I may cry....or go insane.....who the hell am I kidding, I'm already insane.

    Well update soon!!!!!!!! I wanna know what's up with Kai
    March 27th, 2010 at 02:44am
  • averino

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    I hope you become super famous.
    But try to remember the little people.
    Tell me if you write another story!
    March 26th, 2010 at 11:18pm
  • yo !

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    This Story Is Kaboodles Great ! Haa ,
    I Just Read The Whole Thing In Like 2-3Days & I Must Say , I'm Hooked . She Preggo , Yesss ?
    I Like Your Writing , Its Absolutely Amazing . KeepItUp!
    UpdateSooon (:
    This Is Dray: O]-< The Manly Man .
    March 26th, 2010 at 01:52am
  • tarantallegra

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    Ooh. I liked that chapter. It was dark and slightly scary. Keep that up?
    March 24th, 2010 at 03:30am
  • A.U.T.O.M.A.T.I.C

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    OMG! Shes preggers again!
    And why do I I mean Kai have to be evil?!
    And this would be a awesome hit if you got it published.
    March 23rd, 2010 at 12:38am
  • Beautiful -Disaster-

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    One question...what did The Little Devil mean by "its a girl?"

    and you are such an amazing writer! I do believe that you could get this published right now and it would be a HUGE hit!
    March 20th, 2010 at 11:20pm
  • StealingSouthDakota;

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    I have stayed up and read from chapter 1 to chapter 163! and I always laughed at your authors notes and the responses to the cliffhangers.. but now, all I can say is

    DAMN YOU AND YOUR UNCANNY ABILITY TO LEAVE ABSOLUTELY AMAZING CLIFFHANGERS, THAT STILL MAKE ME WANT TO HUNT YOU DOWN AND STRANGLE YOU!!!!!

    Please update as soon as possible, for I am absolutely addicted to this story, and doubt I can go on with my life if it isn't updated soon.
    March 20th, 2010 at 08:49pm
  • xxxchicaxxx

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    amazing update! Although I secretly wished Kai wouldnt become evil :(

    p.s. I love you! The world need more authors like you :)
    March 20th, 2010 at 02:49am
  • Burgerat20

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    ahhhh yesss keep going
    March 20th, 2010 at 02:17am
  • Hezzarther

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    O:
    March 19th, 2010 at 10:02pm
  • orangeducktape4ever

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    again?!?!
    ecstatic when i saw the update..

    more more more?
    (:
    luvin it!
    March 19th, 2010 at 09:17pm
  • who.could.guess

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    yay another update!! this story is so freakin amazing!!!
    March 19th, 2010 at 02:52pm
  • elshiexx

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    although i love your stroy the fact that my mum is madly inlove with this too and so now we HAVE to share an account so that she can read it too.

    aslo she said your little authors note is beautiful and that other authors shoud follow.
    update quickly.
    my mum and me
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    so that we can have a massive debate about the characters and confuse the hell out of my dad
    March 19th, 2010 at 02:13pm
  • BellaNotte

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    wow... that chapter was just wow!
    i was at the edge of my seat!
    why is kai all of a sudden so scary?
    hm... great work though!
    KEEP GOING!

    ps... LOVED your authors note! >D
    March 19th, 2010 at 01:22pm
  • averino

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    Darius's sperm is evil.
    And now I'm scared for her.
    March 19th, 2010 at 02:57am
  • ikickshins

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    Wow.
    Is it just me or did he grow FAST.
    O-O
    update soon?
    March 19th, 2010 at 02:55am
  • Paparazzi

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    I love this story!
    March 18th, 2010 at 09:19am
  • xxxchicaxxx

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    YAY!!! :D I twas upset because I wasnt getting updates and I finally checked it and it there was THREE NEW CHAPTERS!!! >.< The bite is OVER! Now they can be together FOREVER!!! :)
    I <3 your stories....oh!!! Other reader peoples! Read her other series about Jade and Edwin! Those four stories are the sh** but I personally like the first the best out of all of them!!! :D
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    I...think Bryce is a douche. Iz sorry, I just dont like him! *grumpy face*
    Well....CHEERS FOR A HAPPY FOREVER FOR DARIUS, GRACIE, AND THEIR FOUR LITTLE ONES!!! :)
    March 17th, 2010 at 09:52pm
  • uncontrolablefire

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    i sat up for three days till the middle of the night to get to this story and every night i went to bed and layed there for an hour thinking about your story and then when i woke up i ended up thinking about your story .... but now im sad i got to the end.... your going to continue soon right??? right????? and i think this story could be a book and the top sellers or fave list or watever you want to call it....and thats y i love mibba...cuz u get awesome writers to give you free books...though i feel sorry for the authors.... cause there losing out on money but they do get to keep the satification of how happy they made there readers.....wow this is long i think ill stop writing now sorry i got carried away well obviously i love your story keep writing
    March 17th, 2010 at 03:36am
  • averino

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    Aww that was really sweet.
    Kai's first was hilarious!
    March 17th, 2010 at 01:10am