Silent Spring - Comments

I like this.
I like this a lot.
But seriously?
Eli needs to stop being an ass.
it's getting on my nerves how ass-y he is to Jack >_>
BUT ANYWAYS.
update soon, please?(:
I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE<3

Eli is such a dick! But this is a very real story, not all 'me and my boyfriend are so in love'. And its not all 'my boyfriend beats me up 24/7' either. Love <3

This is very, very well written, and your style reminds me of Sarah Dunant. She writes crime, usually, but the last book I read by her called 'Transgressions' is what your story, so far, reminds me of.
Excuse my ramblings, haha. I love how it's so realistic, and not all "I'm so perfect, there's nothing wrong with my life, I'm so happy," but also isn't really depressing. It's real.
I'm looking forward to more of this, and will be sure to check out anything else you have written. (:

Loving this. I just read all three chapters. The way she and Oliver first kind of met was pretty neat, I thought. I love how she just sits on the fire escape. It seems like it would be a calming spot.
I can't wait to see what else is going to happen! :]

i like this so far!

mmm, i'm really liking this so far. (: like a lot.

Uhmmm.
Pretty much an amazing fucking writer
Yeah? Yeah. =]
You rule writing & such.
Update as soon as possible, k?

This is reeeeaally good! Your a very good writer.
Update soon? (:

I like this, very much.
Why yes, yes I do, :]
You're an amazing writer!

HELL YEAAAH MUTHAAFUCKKKAAHH.
hahaha, i'm a loser.

i likkeeey. i mean, i don't like the banner.
or the girl's name. or oliver. BUT.
i like the way you write and i like the plot.

sooo, after you update m&s, and PB b-sides,
you gotta update this. ALRIGHT, SISTERRR!?!
:D

Well you have my intrigued, as always.
I'm excited to see what happens, seriously. EXCITED

Woooo a new story!
And by one of my favourite Authors on here

Am I subscribing? Why yes I am, now to start reading it!!!

= )