I can't even bring myself to write a proper review. This is amazing. You put me to shame in so many ways. I'm sorry that it took me so long to read this. It's been up in a different tab and I forgot about it. That sounds horrible, I know, and I'm super sorry. But I definitely regret it so much, after this.
Everything about this pulled me in to read more. I loved the way you described everything. I loved the way you kept writing Lola to mentally complai about her mom. I adored how you threw Jace in there. Everything fit together so nicely.
My favorite line of this, you ask? Socks... Find socks, of course. And shoes. Shoes are always nice.
Every line of this is pure gold, but that is my favorite. :lmfao While reading it, I thought to myself, "That is so Jenn."
I love how you have Jace playing Christmas music from his truck. :tehe: It's a cute touch.
The line about him only staying in that town for Lola was absolutely adorable. I actually said, "Awwweee :cute:" aloud at that part. :XD
So basically, Jennface, if this doesn't place, I shall start a screaming rampage. You're a genius, an amazing writer, and a great friend. :arms:
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I can't even bring myself to write a proper review. This is amazing. You put me to shame in so many ways. I'm sorry that it took me so long to read this. It's been up in a different tab and I forgot about it. That sounds horrible, I know, and I'm super sorry. But I definitely regret it so much, after this.
Everything about this pulled me in to read more. I loved the way you described everything. I loved the way you kept writing Lola to mentally complai about her mom. I adored how you threw Jace in there. Everything fit together so nicely.
My favorite line of this, you ask?
Socks... Find socks, of course. And shoes. Shoes are always nice.
Every line of this is pure gold, but that is my favorite. :lmfao While reading it, I thought to myself, "That is so Jenn."
I love how you have Jace playing Christmas music from his truck. :tehe: It's a cute touch.
The line about him only staying in that town for Lola was absolutely adorable. I actually said, "Awwweee :cute:" aloud at that part. :XD
So basically, Jennface, if this doesn't place, I shall start a screaming rampage. You're a genius, an amazing writer, and a great friend.
I love youuuu. :tehe: