September 1st, 2009 at 02:39am
last year's warpedd.
hm, i went to VA's.
it was the 15th of July.
:D
i went to two this year (:
anywho, my name is already in this heh, Andrea (:
but i love this, please update soon ;D
That's a really good question. It was actually my band's name until we changed it and because I couldn't think of anything else I just used that. But at the minute we've covered bands like All Time Low, Paramore, and Fall Out Boy and I imagine this band to be the same kind of music so yeah I suppose that is their 'sound'. Really good question, but yes I think you're right :D
- madam mazz;:
- Okay, so I recently became an All Time Low fan (their cover of Umbrella by Rihanna was the first song I listen to by them!) and this is the first ATL fan fic I've read. And I love it!!!!!
I mean, I don't really know Alex, or Jack or Zack or Rian very well, but I'm loving this story anyway, dude! Haha.
Oh, and random question, what's Too Close for Comfort's sound? Is it sort of like Paramore?
Indeed it does. I don't know if I've made this very clear, but it's supposed to be a relationship where when they're together, they're inseperable, but when they're apart it's as if they don't know each other exists.
- theacademyis.:
- Alex and Lisa's relationship seems to be spiraling downward,
and Alex doesn't seem to give two shits about it. Poor Lisa.:/
I was kindof confused about the end of the chapter,
but that's probably just me being ditzy, like always.;D
Oh, and apparently, Mibba doesn't like to tell me when stories update,
so I had to find out for myself if you updated or not.
I think I might kill myself if I have to sit there and go through all of my subscribtions,
to find out whether they got updated or not, especially since I have 4 pages.
D:
Anyway, I hope you're feeling better, and I'll be sure to leave more long comments.
<3
thanks a bunch :]
- MattLuvv:
- Wow, this is a good story. Really interesting. I'ma subscribe 8D
Great story, funny too.
It meant a lot! A real lot! :D
- theacademyis.:
- I finally got around to reading the two chapters you posted since I last checked.(:
I'm usually impatient, and I prefer for things to move quickly,
but honestly... I don't know what it is about this story, but I like how slow paced it is.
This story is so realistic, it's weird. Haha. And I think you're style's amazing.
I like how you put enough dialogue to satisfy people,
but you also put some detail in it. And I like that some chapters have little dialogue,
and some have a lot. There's a good balance between the chapters.
Haha, okay. I'm gonna shut up now.
I don't know how much any of that will mean to you,
since it's coming from an average 15 year old teenager, so.
XP
Anyway, I figured you deserved an extra long comment,
seeing as I haven't been keeping up these days.
BUT, band camp is over, so I have more time to check updates,
even though I'll be scrambling to get done my summer work.
Okay, now I'm done.
<3
Oh it's awesome, f you like Cobra Starship's more synthy stuff then you'll like it :)
- Highly Suspicious:
- I guess you posted right after I read earlier or some shit, because shortly after, there were two more chapters! You can't even imagine the joy I felt.
And damn, dude, don't change nothin'. Perfect style, I think. You incorporate just the right amount of everything. (And I don't know about the song, but the movie Wet Hot American Summer is fuckin' great.)
I'll mention you in the author's note, I'll be like "SO THIS IS WHAT WAS GOING ON WHEN YOU WERE WATCHING MUSIC"
fun times :)