Colder Than My Heart - Comments

dree love.:

last year's warpedd.
hm, i went to VA's.
it was the 15th of July.
:D

i went to two this year (:
anywho, my name is already in this heh, Andrea (:
but i love this, please update soon ;D

Oh really? Ha wow! :D
I'll mention you in the author's note, I'll be like "SO THIS IS WHAT WAS GOING ON WHEN YOU WERE WATCHING MUSIC"
fun times :)

last year's warpedd.
hm, i went to VA's.
it was the 15th of July.
:D

i went to two this year (:
anywho, my name is already in this heh, Andrea (:
but i love this, please update soon ;D

madam mazz;:

Okay, so I recently became an All Time Low fan (their cover of Umbrella by Rihanna was the first song I listen to by them!) and this is the first ATL fan fic I've read. And I love it!!!!!
I mean, I don't really know Alex, or Jack or Zack or Rian very well, but I'm loving this story anyway, dude! Haha.
Oh, and random question, what's Too Close for Comfort's sound? Is it sort of like Paramore?

That's a really good question. It was actually my band's name until we changed it and because I couldn't think of anything else I just used that. But at the minute we've covered bands like All Time Low, Paramore, and Fall Out Boy and I imagine this band to be the same kind of music so yeah I suppose that is their 'sound'. Really good question, but yes I think you're right :D

Okay, so I recently became an All Time Low fan (their cover of Umbrella by Rihanna was the first song I listen to by them!) and this is the first ATL fan fic I've read. And I love it!!!!!
I mean, I don't really know Alex, or Jack or Zack or Rian very well, but I'm loving this story anyway, dude! Haha.
Oh, and random question, what's Too Close for Comfort's sound? Is it sort of like Paramore?

You have no idea how excited I am for the next chapter.
Sarah & Alex will finally meet.
That is, if things go according to plan.

Anywho, I really liked the chapter.
It's nice to see that Sarah's slowly but surely gaining confidence.

Hopefully Alex is actually on the bus when Sarah gets on there lol

Aww, I'm sick too. I really hope you get better, and this chapter with Lisa and Max made me smile lots. :)

theacademyis.:

Alex and Lisa's relationship seems to be spiraling downward,
and Alex doesn't seem to give two shits about it. Poor Lisa.:/
I was kindof confused about the end of the chapter,
but that's probably just me being ditzy, like always.;D

Oh, and apparently, Mibba doesn't like to tell me when stories update,
so I had to find out for myself if you updated or not.
I think I might kill myself if I have to sit there and go through all of my subscribtions,
to find out whether they got updated or not, especially since I have 4 pages.
D:

Anyway, I hope you're feeling better, and I'll be sure to leave more long comments.
<3

Indeed it does. I don't know if I've made this very clear, but it's supposed to be a relationship where when they're together, they're inseperable, but when they're apart it's as if they don't know each other exists.
Which is actually exactly what my best friend is going through with his girlfriend. It's confusing but for some reason it's lasted, so I've kind of spun that on Alex and Lisa eventhough I know this wouldn't happen for them, they really do seem to love each other :)
And that sucks :/
Well I'll be updating one of my stories every day. So if I don't you can spam hate me :)
I have the same, 4 pages, and I've had to do that every day for months. It sucks, but it's just started sending me email updates again but now I've gotten the hang of it I just check for the hell of it. It's kinda stupid really.

Thank you, I look forward to it :con: <3

Alex and Lisa's relationship seems to be spiraling downward,
and Alex doesn't seem to give two shits about it. Poor Lisa.:/
I was kindof confused about the end of the chapter,
but that's probably just me being ditzy, like always.;D

Oh, and apparently, Mibba doesn't like to tell me when stories update,
so I had to find out for myself if you updated or not.
I think I might kill myself if I have to sit there and go through all of my subscribtions,
to find out whether they got updated or not, especially since I have 4 pages.
D:

Anyway, I hope you're feeling better, and I'll be sure to leave more long comments.
<3

MattLuvv:

Wow, this is a good story. Really interesting. I'ma subscribe 8D
Great story, funny too.

thanks a bunch :]

Wow, this is a good story. Really interesting. I'ma subscribe 8D
Great story, funny too.

Thanks to everyone hoping I'll feel better. I'm gonna be updating all day tomorrow (actually today) but it's 4:18 AM so I'm gonna try and catch some sleep. I have no other plans :D

Great story! I love it so far. :D

great update
hope you feel better :)

Oh no!
I hope you feel better.
It would be quite terrible if you had swine flu.

In regards to the story, I feel really bad for Lisa. There she is, holding onto Alex, and he doesn't seem to give a shit about their relationship.

Despite that, I really like where you're going with this story.

theacademyis.:

I finally got around to reading the two chapters you posted since I last checked.(:
I'm usually impatient, and I prefer for things to move quickly,
but honestly... I don't know what it is about this story, but I like how slow paced it is.
This story is so realistic, it's weird. Haha. And I think you're style's amazing.
I like how you put enough dialogue to satisfy people,
but you also put some detail in it. And I like that some chapters have little dialogue,
and some have a lot. There's a good balance between the chapters.

Haha, okay. I'm gonna shut up now.
I don't know how much any of that will mean to you,
since it's coming from an average 15 year old teenager, so.
XP

Anyway, I figured you deserved an extra long comment,
seeing as I haven't been keeping up these days.
BUT, band camp is over, so I have more time to check updates,
even though I'll be scrambling to get done my summer work.

Okay, now I'm done.
<3

It meant a lot! A real lot! :D
Especially since I'm just another 15 year old teenager too so it's all sweet.
Thank you for the long comment, I like longer comments, it shows me you're listening :D
But thanks for taking the time to write that.
Love you all !
Less than three

I finally got around to reading the two chapters you posted since I last checked.(:
I'm usually impatient, and I prefer for things to move quickly,
but honestly... I don't know what it is about this story, but I like how slow paced it is.
This story is so realistic, it's weird. Haha. And I think you're style's amazing.
I like how you put enough dialogue to satisfy people,
but you also put some detail in it. And I like that some chapters have little dialogue,
and some have a lot. There's a good balance between the chapters.

Haha, okay. I'm gonna shut up now.
I don't know how much any of that will mean to you,
since it's coming from an average 15 year old teenager, so.
XP

Anyway, I figured you deserved an extra long comment,
seeing as I haven't been keeping up these days.
BUT, band camp is over, so I have more time to check updates,
even though I'll be scrambling to get done my summer work.

Okay, now I'm done.
<3

love love loveeee.
and alex is such a horny bastard.
still love him thoughh.
anyways, i always like dialogue, this seemed perfect to me.
no worries.
please write moree (:

Highly Suspicious:

I guess you posted right after I read earlier or some shit, because shortly after, there were two more chapters! You can't even imagine the joy I felt.

And damn, dude, don't change nothin'. Perfect style, I think. You incorporate just the right amount of everything. (And I don't know about the song, but the movie Wet Hot American Summer is fuckin' great.)

Oh it's awesome, f you like Cobra Starship's more synthy stuff then you'll like it :)
And the Perfect style, I think quote made really smile. Honestly I wasn't looking for people to go "No irt's amazing!" But reading that just made me feel more secure. Thanks :)

I guess you posted right after I read earlier or some shit, because shortly after, there were two more chapters! You can't even imagine the joy I felt.

And damn, dude, don't change nothin'. Perfect style, I think. You incorporate just the right amount of everything. (And I don't know about the song, but the movie Wet Hot American Summer is fuckin' great.)