Lose You Tonight - Comments

  • xxoomwauhzxxoo

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    ughh soo i know its like a year later after the story is over but i loved it...until she was an idiot in ch34.
    i absolutely loved her until that chapter. but now i kinda just think shes an idiot. even after they got back together i still dont like her. i might have started to like her again if she would have been the one to tell him about kasey. not him having to find out randomly. he deserved wayyy better than that. i also think zack should have been a good big brother and still told ville where she was. he knows ville didnt do anything wrong but he pretty much was helping keep scarlett from happiness and kasey from having a father.
    i hate when the girl decides to keep it a secret when she pregnant. unless the guy was a rapist or abusive then i think he has the right to know he has a child.
    and for her to leave him with no explanation from him is stupid too. its not even like she saw ville and jonna kiss or something. she left just based off of what jonna said. if she really loved him she would have at least stayed to hear what he has to say or see how he interacts with jonna. or if shes gonna leave at least allow him to explain later after she cools off.
    January 17th, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • TashaInsanity

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    So! God! Damn! Good!

    Your seriously like the best writer ever!
    January 24th, 2010 at 02:12pm
  • Crash Thrusts.

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    I just read this whole story and I have to tell you, I loved it. :)
    December 18th, 2009 at 06:04am
  • Derpina.

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    I missed the last two chapters but here I am now. =] Blubbering of course because the ending was so beautiful! =] I'll be looking for a new story!
    November 25th, 2009 at 07:00am
  • DancingOnTheGraves

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    Yay, I loved this story so much. You're a really amazing writer. I cried so bad though. Anything to do with true love and children makes me melt. Well done though x
    November 18th, 2009 at 12:43am
  • perchance2dream

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    can't believe i fell so far behind, but i finished it & i liked it :D
    October 14th, 2009 at 07:33am
  • personalspaceinvader

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    It's over? :O Not fair!
    Ahh, I'm kidding.
    I liked this story. I think I'll read your other Ville story when you decide to make it. =]
    October 13th, 2009 at 04:37am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    nice ending, the lyrics were just a tad off Sugar. please out another Ville story!
    October 13th, 2009 at 02:24am
  • Lone_Wolf

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    love it
    October 12th, 2009 at 10:56pm
  • Raven616

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    wow that was a GREAT end... and you made me more happier that you are thinking another Ville story.... thank you
    October 12th, 2009 at 07:32pm
  • HeartKiller666

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    omg its over..i think im tearing up lol well that was a great ride, cant wait for the next story =D
    October 12th, 2009 at 06:43pm
  • HopelesslyInLove

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    im sad about this story being finished. a great way to connect it to the story!! please tell me when you start your new story
    October 12th, 2009 at 06:41pm
  • NothingIsPermanent

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    Loved this story<3
    I hope you write a new ville one, ill be on the lookout:)
    (Even though I read all your stories, so ill probably notice :) )
    October 12th, 2009 at 06:35pm
  • amaya.-.

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    ahh, this one ending too? Well, looking forward to the next one :)
    Great story :)
    October 12th, 2009 at 06:25pm
  • atrocious

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    Thank you venus for pointing out that mistake :)
    October 12th, 2009 at 06:25pm
  • HeartKiller666

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    YAY an update, the ending was sweet btw since i dont want people reporting this story just somethin that i think you might wanna correct >>>"I want you and Scarlett to move in with me. I want us to live together as a family. I want us together." He said, letting her know that he was in this one hundred percent.<<< i think you meant to say "I want you and Kasey.." just putting it out there but otherwise the chapter was great ^__^
    October 12th, 2009 at 06:09pm
  • burned hearts

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    still amazing!!!
    October 12th, 2009 at 09:50am
  • WildRainDancer

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    <3
    October 12th, 2009 at 07:04am
  • trytobefree

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    i have to say thats one great story you got there:D good job!!
    October 10th, 2009 at 08:43pm
  • Raven616

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    aww finally
    October 10th, 2009 at 08:24pm