ughh soo i know its like a year later after the story is over but i loved it...until she was an idiot in ch34. i absolutely loved her until that chapter. but now i kinda just think shes an idiot. even after they got back together i still dont like her. i might have started to like her again if she would have been the one to tell him about kasey. not him having to find out randomly. he deserved wayyy better than that. i also think zack should have been a good big brother and still told ville where she was. he knows ville didnt do anything wrong but he pretty much was helping keep scarlett from happiness and kasey from having a father. i hate when the girl decides to keep it a secret when she pregnant. unless the guy was a rapist or abusive then i think he has the right to know he has a child. and for her to leave him with no explanation from him is stupid too. its not even like she saw ville and jonna kiss or something. she left just based off of what jonna said. if she really loved him she would have at least stayed to hear what he has to say or see how he interacts with jonna. or if shes gonna leave at least allow him to explain later after she cools off.
Yay, I loved this story so much. You're a really amazing writer. I cried so bad though. Anything to do with true love and children makes me melt. Well done though x
YAY an update, the ending was sweet btw since i dont want people reporting this story just somethin that i think you might wanna correct >>>"I want you and Scarlett to move in with me. I want us to live together as a family. I want us together." He said, letting her know that he was in this one hundred percent.<<< i think you meant to say "I want you and Kasey.." just putting it out there but otherwise the chapter was great ^__^
i absolutely loved her until that chapter. but now i kinda just think shes an idiot. even after they got back together i still dont like her. i might have started to like her again if she would have been the one to tell him about kasey. not him having to find out randomly. he deserved wayyy better than that. i also think zack should have been a good big brother and still told ville where she was. he knows ville didnt do anything wrong but he pretty much was helping keep scarlett from happiness and kasey from having a father.
i hate when the girl decides to keep it a secret when she pregnant. unless the guy was a rapist or abusive then i think he has the right to know he has a child.
and for her to leave him with no explanation from him is stupid too. its not even like she saw ville and jonna kiss or something. she left just based off of what jonna said. if she really loved him she would have at least stayed to hear what he has to say or see how he interacts with jonna. or if shes gonna leave at least allow him to explain later after she cools off.