First Glance - Comments

Aahhhhhh this is just too cute! My comments are sucky right now but seriously, this is just cute.

I adored the first paragraph. Again, (I’m going to mention this so often I know it) I love love love your details. I especially liked the mud bit, I’m not sure why. Also, because you set this on a farm, I loved it even more. I mean, it’s not a very common place to be written about, especially on this site. Most things I’ve read are city-based. And you’ve made it so they’re on a farm farm, where they wear dirty trousers and do chores. I loved it, period. It’s old-fashioned, they’re both adorable, your writing makes me feel like I’m watching a movie instead of reading something…

*grabs popcorn and sits back*

<3 Haven

Aww, that was so cute! ^_^ I didn't realize it was in the past that far either until reading the third one. :D Loved it!<3

wow,i like that this story doesnt seem like so modern,
it has a simple background,
great job so far
i have missed reading your stories:D